| "why the sphynx was built !" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Katmon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 13:42 CST
Comment/Review:
That's kinda cute!!! *winks*
Ja!
KK |
Reviewed By: AisuErufu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2002 14:03 CST
Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! SETO!!!!!! *sobs hysterically* Sweet fic anyway! I love Ancient Eygpt, and that's why I'm gonna be a Eygptologist when I get older! *beams* |
Reviewed By: lady_shinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2002 15:13 CDT
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My friend Sheenagami can not spell. Even though I corrected this for her, she only chose not to heed my corrections! Damn her! She knows incorrect spelling kills me! *dies* *undies to rant again* Wow! I'm undead! I thought of that first! Good fanfic, Sheen! |
Reviewed By: Sheenagami [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2002 06:53 CDT
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just to clear some stuff up the pic is like the reborn version of her! 'tis why its in another series!(does that excuse sound good?) |
Reviewed By: SamandYamiSam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2002 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sam:I like this fan fic.
Yami:FINALLY!
Sam:Shush..anyway...the only thing I have a problem with is how you spelt clothes...lol...you put "close"...but its "clothes"...anyway...its a nice story...yet sad..T.T aaaw...I really like it^_^
Yami:stop saying that..
Sam:Well I do! |
Reviewed By: Samantha On: October 14, 2002 12:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
ER... eh heh. This fanfic is set in Ancient Egypt isn't it? So... don't mean to critisize but... do Ancient Egyptians speak modern slang like 'ok'?
Just a thought. But otherwise it's pretty good. Really.
Yami: I don't think you sound very believable.
SHUT UP!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Brockiepoo15 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2002 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh-hey!! WOW!! I KNEW i'd like the fanfic!! It was great! OH WOW! Havent heard these Egyptian names in a LONG time!! Thank you sooo much for the reminders!! Yay! Anubis! yay! Ra! ::gasps:: BASET!! ok... i'll shut up now.. great fic!! please write more!! It made me cry a little... aww...
-Brockiepoo15 PikaRppr1 =^_^= MEOW!! NEKKOS RULE!!! |
Reviewed By: Kyouki [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2002 15:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
-Stares- ....Hmmm... Weren't Yami and Seto together in Ancient Egypt? |
