| "Half a War" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Jerry On: March 26, 2002 23:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi. I think it is a GREAT!!!!!! story so far. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Thank you for your time. |
Reviewed By: Jerry On: March 26, 2002 23:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi. I think it is a GREAT!!!!!! story so far. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Thank you for your time. |
Reviewed By: C. Rose On: February 22, 2002 04:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave this a couple of chapters and had to stop. There isn't enough information being given to understand the crossover and that seems to be needed for those of us that have no idea what homeworld is.
The idea that a sixteen year old girl could be incharge of a carrior or something along those lines seems a bit reduculas to me, it needs to be explained how this came about. The same goes for Nabiki and Kasumi having things like this while Soun sits arounds and lets his daughters do everything while his wife is still alive?
I think this needs to be thought a bit more. Those are the problems I found in just the first two chapters. I figure it may have many more in further chapters. |
