| "It Takes More" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Saphire13 On: November 24, 2002 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It has a great start.
please keep going |
Reviewed By: Heikgan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2002 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool story i love the beging i hope you update soon ^_^
Ja 'Ne |
Reviewed By: Mariah Ashley [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 07:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a nice story, though everyone's doing the Bulma gets abused by her boyfriend now a days. That's why I gave you a seven, continue soon though. |
