Reviewed By: Platinum On: November 16, 2002 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read all of your chapters so far, the fic's really good! But.... (insert "dun-dun-dun" here) your grammmar and spelling could use a tiny bit of work. No matter. I absolutely love stories with cold or deceptive female characters, especially if they are assasins. They remind me of me! *smirks* Deceptive... fun... *ahem* Nevermind that, you did not just read that. Plus, I like how you portray the Gundam boys in school. Anyway, this is an awesome fic, update soon, and don't get discouraged if you don't get many readers/ reviews; you've still got me!! (What a consolation, huh? -_-;) I'll always write very long reviews; or at least very long when you put it in one of these message boxes. But if you don't want me to write these super long ones, just tell me in your next chapter, okay? Can't wait to read the next section in this great story!! |
