| "The Decisions We Make" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
Reviewed By: Tanzanite Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 04:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story, but chapters 7 & 8 don't show up. please conitnue
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Reviewed By: Loar5 On: March 22, 2005 04:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic! It's very well written, and the pairing is great.Some of the chapters are missing, though.
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Reviewed By: mage13x On: September 12, 2004 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love your work. You are an amazing writer and I hope you come out with many more fics.
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Reviewed By: mariantonieta On: March 19, 2004 13:11 CST
Comment/Review:
that was a very romantic story i really loved it. keep it up, it is a great fic.
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Reviewed By: Kai Hit On: November 23, 2003 06:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEy its cool but next time get yami to kill kai Please From Kai
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Reviewed By: Riley Maxwell & Rhea Maxwell On: February 20, 2003 20:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Rhea: Yet another reason why Bakura is a d!ck
head.
Riley: You just say that because you're enemies!
Rhea: So.
Riley: I love this fic!
Rhea: It's okay.
Bakura: I am the great Bakura! Bow down to me!
Rhea: Quiet tomb robber.
Bakura: Make me pirate.
Riley: Uh-oh. Great fic. Excuse me. *takes
really deep deep breath* CUT IT OUT!!!!!!!!!!!
*the two yamis stop and blink stupidly.*
Riley: Love ya fic! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Pandapants182 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 23:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So psychological! Really, that last chapter was. My, I would feel like that... only not as bad.
Yugi: That's cuz you're too happy all the time. Someone needs to bonk you over the head or something, Panda Girl.
Me: Oh be quiet, Yugi. Anyways, I still love this fanfic. Too bad Bakura's hal-dead. Otherwise... I'd be sure to blast to the dark side of the moon! That way, he could live with all the losers of Gundam matches!
Yugi: Losers don't live on the moon!
Me: They do now! *blasts all Gundam battle losers to the moon* by-ebye losers. You too, Kura-chan... don't pull that puppy-dof eyes thing on me!
Bakura: Why would I do that?
Me: -_-0 |
Reviewed By: Katmon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2003 14:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Katmon: Oh, poor Ryou... BAKURA MADE HIM DO IT!!!! AH!!!!
Yami: KK, calm down...
Katmon: I WILL NOT CALM DOWN!!!!
Yuugi: WE know better! I swear we do!
Seiji: *bashes KK over head*
Katmon: X.X
Kurai: SEIJI!!!!
Seiji: Oops... *runs* |
Reviewed By: Pandapants182 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2002 12:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me: Who would think that poor, innocent, cute, adorable, pure-hearted, sweet, forgiving, sad, wittle Ryou would be hard-core enough to even lay a finger on Bakura?! Let alone kill him?! Who?! Who?! Show yourself, Ryou-hater!!!!!!
*one person stands up*
Me: *throws a Dale Jr. cardboard cut-out at him* Eat that, Ryou-hater!!! Anyways, this is super fantastic, Wingzero! ^^ Everyone loves a good angst story! Unless they're that guy. *points to the Ryou-hater*
Ryou-hater: Ryou Sucks!!!!
Me: What, what, what?!?!?! *tackles Ryou-hater and starts flinging him at the wall* Don't... you... be... dissin'... my Ryou!!!!! Grah!!!!
Ryou-hater: X______________X;;;;;;; I won't do it again! I promise!
Me: *let's him go* Do you swear on all that is pure and innocent like Ryou?
Ryou-hetr: Nope. *runs away at the speed of light*
Me: Come back here!!! *to Wingzero* Please continue your fanfics, Wing-chan. They are oh so wonderful. ^^ TTFN! *continues running after the guy* |
Reviewed By: Karadaki On: December 21, 2002 22:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU SHOULD UPDATE THIS FIC MORE OFTEN!!!!! I LUV THIS ONE!!!!!! ::sob:: poor Ryou...well, actually poor Bakura after Ryou's finished with him...AWWW!!!! ILL JUST GIVE THEM BOTH HUGS!!!! YAY!!!!!! KEEP UPDATING THIS ONE!!! |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam On: December 21, 2002 06:40 CST
Comment/Review:
Why is everyone picking on Ryou? Isn't he suppose to be the victim? Meanies... Please continue... and shove those nasty people's words right back up their bumholes!!!! |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2002 05:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT!!!! FIC!!!!! *turns to Bakura and starts b*tch slapping him*
DON'T... YOU... DARE.... DISSS BALLET!!!!!!! *in between each slap* I take ballet as a hobby so that's why I'm offended.
Bakura: @.@
Ryou: -_-'
Anywayz I like this fic so far and I'm so happy that Ryou's gonna go and stand up to that bully. *huggles Ryou*
Ryou: ^_________________________________^
I'm even happier that Tea gets to be a loner...
Tea: T_T
HEHE... I wonder if Ryou does stand up to his Yami will Bakura think he learnt it from his ballet lessons and join too?
Bakura: O()O...
Just a thought. |
Reviewed By: Okunote On: November 23, 2002 20:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!!!!! THIS FIC ROCKS!!!!! UPDATE IT!!!!!
PU-WEEZE?!!!!!!!!!!! I LUV IT!!! BWAHAHHA!!!!! IT ROCKS!!!!!! Ryuu rocks!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!! CONTINUE WRITING!!!!!! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Pandapants182 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2002 00:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why aren't you updating this?!?!?! I wuv this fic! ;-;
I put you in my fic, just so you know(just forget about it now). Other than that, please update! This is such a good fanfic! I'm sure everyone else who read just got so involved with their reading, they didn't remember to review! |
Reviewed By: Cayenne On: October 26, 2002 13:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
*does first review dance* Woohoo!!! Great story, can't wait for the next chapter and when Ryou finally defends himself. It's about time that boy got a spine in fanfiction. Anyway, just wanted to drop by and say that you should keep this one going. I've never heard of Beyblades, but the way you introduce the characters it isn't hard to get to know their personalities. Keep up the goodwork and update soon!!!! Ja ne!!!! |
Reviewed By: Nikki On: January 18, 2003 15:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rated 10 as best.
I think you should keep writing !!!
Its a really good fic! |
