| "The Bite" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2003 18:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Kakarote inveaded Goku's mind? whoa that is a twist. keep going I want to know more |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2002 14:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh damn a cliff hanger, this is getting better and better |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2002 19:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this gets better and better keep it coming |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2002 18:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great ep love it |
Reviewed By: friezaeaternumyum On: November 23, 2002 19:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its sooo cute pooor veggie chan keep on updating c y a [srry bout the grammar thing but im picky lolbut i still love the stry |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 14:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this si a great story and I like it |
Reviewed By: Super_Saiyan1302 On: November 16, 2002 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was pretty good, but it would be better with more detail of the saiyan female. The bond thanks to the bite is kind of intriguing but is somewhat annoying. Vegeta going and looking for girls w/ Trunks was kinda funny, can't wait for chapter 5. |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: November 16, 2002 17:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ah, you know I love your stuff, but I'll say it anyway. I LOVE your stuff. heehee Okay, so you said Kakarott follows him. I'm getting a mite bit impatient on the following part. It does happen, correct? ^_~ Just wondering! Thanks for the plug for DoY! BTW, can I make a rec? I'd love to see more fight scenes! I love them! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2002 17:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very good I like it |
Reviewed By: wawashkeshi On: November 04, 2002 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
i've really enjoyed these 2 chapters! the interaction between characters is good. it's also neat to see the possibilities of vegeta. |
Reviewed By: vinn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2002 23:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was exellent
your fic is really original
i can't wait for more
so please update soon
this is one of the better fics i have read
i need more or i'll go spaz (lol):) |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2002 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Welcome to mm.org! Well, since I want you to continue breathing....
I like! This is certainly interesting. So, the 'bad' Kakarott will soon be joining us? Hm. I liked that at the end. 'Let him stay.' Vegeta wouldn't want himself to go back after all. Have to keep the dragonballs away, and Bulma.... Bra? Hm, Trunks is 14 years older than her I think.... Anyways, continue. I'm sure some evil is pop up soon! |
Reviewed By: ErieDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2002 17:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, this is a really interesting start! It's creative to see how Hito Vegeta and younger Vegeta interact. You write very well, no grammatical or spelling errors I can see. You could use a bit more description, but the speed it's moving along at is fine. I hope to see more soon! :)
~erie. |
Reviewed By: Lauryyn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2002 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Thats was awesome. I hope i get to read a fight between evil Kakarott (maybe it is not really
Kakarott in Kakarotts Body. He can not be this evil) and our lovely Goku (and Goku is naturally stronger) and Goku sense that his counterpart is not his really his counterpart. Or what if little Vegeta falls in Love with Goku to get rid of Kakarotto... there so many ways. I hope the next chapiter will out be soon. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 16:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and it is so good. keep up the good work. |
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