| "The Bite" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 12:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. You've left it at what could be a fine ending, but I'd be much happier if you decided to continue the story. Thanks for the wonderful fic. |
Reviewed By: van On: June 03, 2003 14:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
interesting story, i'm only sad that Kakarotto had to die. I think if he woke up afer Brolli was destoyed he wouldn't have rememberd anything like Goku, i think it was very unfair for him to die. It was Brolli not him that hurt Vegeta. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 09:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was wonderfull and keepit coming great job |
Reviewed By: Rebs On: March 25, 2003 13:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is really cool. Hope you put up a new chapter soon. I cant wait to see how the fight turns out. |
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 12:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh, plot twist!!! I was hoping this fic would go on a little longer, and now it will. Yay! |
Reviewed By: angelscaramel On: March 19, 2003 13:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting idea. I like it!
Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Poke On: February 25, 2003 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All i have to say is that I've really enjoyed this fic. it is sooooo good! :) |
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 11:53 CST
Comment/Review:
Yay, updates!!! I'm looking forward to the big fight scene... Go Hito and Vegeta! Thanks for keeping this fic going, I really like it. |
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 12:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, really excellent fic!! I love your comedy, I didn't know you could write drama/action this well. Please update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Vejitalover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 18:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Cool, cool, cool. Please continue. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 13:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes yes keep this up I love this fic. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2003 13:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was another great ep keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2003 18:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Kakarote inveaded Goku's mind? whoa that is a twist. keep going I want to know more |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2002 14:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh damn a cliff hanger, this is getting better and better |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2002 19:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this gets better and better keep it coming |
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