| "Bondage Fairies -- Pfil and Pamila: A Thin Line Between Love and Want" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Magical Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 07:21 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a really good story u had me worried at the beginning when rite off the bat it was sex but then it actually developed into a plot line. It was really good and u got me reading ur other stories which is what I plan on doing!!!
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Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm...I can't help but say that I was very impressed here. You story goes beyond the normal PWP that is so commonly found, and the story in itself is awesome. While I have never read this particular series (yet...maybe?), I am pretty sure that you made every attempt to keep these two characters in character. Awesome effort, what you have here is nothing short of amazing. Keep up the work, I think I'll take a look at your other works too now... Now the review!~ Your style is solid. The dialogue and actions are well written out, and you give pretty good detail to their thoughts while speaking, and during the lemon scenes, your style leaves nothing to the imagination =P. Just a suggestion, but you might want to focus more on the emotional aspect of lemon scenes, rather than just the physical. They weren't inferior in any way, I just thought that would help improve your stories. Your spelling and grammar are also very sold, and I was only able to catch one or two mistakes. Overall, this story was awesome, I'd love to see more of this kinda styled work. Keep it up, and Peace! d('')b
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: Baby_Anjel_Makoto On: June 19, 2005 20:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story love! And I know you have more to come. Including that DBZ one. Hurry it up! But all in all, it was a good read. SO perfect. Just like you, eh? - smiles - Toodles love. - Your Babygirl
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Reviewed By: Amate On: May 27, 2005 16:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
It gets attention!
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Reviewed By: FanFicPotato [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 11:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright, I would have to say that it was a great story for one. Second it shows the inner sides of a girl. Third, even though I will not usually read anything with a homosexual relationship due to my beliefs, I still enjoyed it. By the way... if you have some free time can you check mine out? They're not as good as yours, but I'd like to see an artists view on them. FanFicPotato
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2004 12:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great. You are an artist.
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Reviewed By: darkrider852 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 16:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is not about the story,( really great though i might add) but could you look at my stories and review at least one of them? thanks. darkrider852 |
Reviewed By: Insane-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 10:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a sweet little Bondage Fairies fic. Not very many of those around. I quite enjoyed it ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Cekil1 On: November 21, 2002 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...Okay maybe I'll say more. This is a very good story and I loved the way it put to rest one of the nagging questions I've had ever since I first picked up a BF manga. Now all I need to know is...Why does "Kondom" wear an actual rubber on his head in his "self insert" issues of BF? |
Reviewed By: CRose [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2002 02:34 CST
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Just stumbled across this, but seeing a fanfic of this series is very cool. It was well written and fun to read. I hope you do another one of these at some point, it's worthy of a sequal.
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Reviewed By: Lucia On: May 16, 2002 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful Fan Fic showing the human relations between a girl and girl. A lover for all who are interested in reading this or just getting a start on their own fan fic adventure. Bravo to you writer and please continue your great work^^ |
Reviewed By: strider_beta On: March 29, 2002 03:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perverts watch out! This ain't your run of the mill lemon here as the author definately did an excellent job writing a deeply romantic story as well as a lemon any fellow hentai freak will eagerly read with sweaty palms! All in all A+ material for sure! |
Reviewed By: iamfanboy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2001 01:24 CST
Comment/Review:
Great, just great. Now I'm gonna have to hunt down the rest of your stuff... hopefully it's here on MM...
But yes, a definite good read, as well as a intruiging exploration of characters that, let's be honest, most fanfic writers wouldn't even care to explore. *grin* Hey hey, thinking originally is what makes a person great, y'know? |
Reviewed By: gibor05 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2001 10:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great lemon, kind of strange, though. Not just a plain lemon, but with a plot and goodness that makes it belivable. *_* |
Reviewed By: Umi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2001 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really well-written. I went to this because I wanted to see what the lemons people are always talking about. So...I decided on this. I must say I thought I was in for it when I read the first few paragraphs, but I found this wasn't raunch but actually a nice little romance. Good job! |
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