| "With Eyes Unclouded" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: Good!
Reviewed By: Lunar_Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 04:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, though sadly its been what 4 years since you've updated it -cries- which in general means you're not going to -cries louder-, i love the consept and just the story in general ^_^ its cute how you become Hitomi's mind and her thoughts, you do so well on just grasping on to what any normal person would be thinking stuck in her situation... well except me who would be all over the man who told me he loved me and kissed me... o yeah id tap that shit xD sorry i love Van... hes just perfect in my eyes anywho.. if you do ever finish this drop me a Line ChasestheMoon@hotmail.com allways watching even if its dicontinued Bethiek.
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Reviewed By: alama On: July 13, 2005 04:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
NIce one:)I've really enjoyed, hope you'll update someday:)
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2004 05:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have enjoyed your story so far. Please continue to write. You have some dark parts to the story which add a sence of depth to the plot and you also have light humorus parts which add cheer.
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Reviewed By: momomia On: February 01, 2004 02:44 CST
Comment/Review:
AH! you must continue to write!! :DD its cute cute cute. *adds to favorites* update soon >:) *greedy*
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Reviewed By: Kristy On: November 13, 2003 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more!! i absolutly love your story. Please write more!!! i wish i had your talent to write stories!!
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Title: KUDOS TO YOU
Reviewed By: devilishfirefly9 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 11:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I really am enjoying this! It's very interesting and I would love to read more !!! Update as soon as you can!!
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Reviewed By: Leira On: September 11, 2003 21:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awwww...it's cute! V/H as a couple in general are just unbearably cute, but this is really sweet! Update soon? Please? |
Reviewed By: CinderellaxVan On: February 01, 2003 11:23 CST
Comment/Review:
GYAH! KEEP WRITING!!!!!! OR DIE!!!!Really great idea, try posting it on fanfiction.net ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Youjibaracuda On: November 15, 2002 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, i've really enjoyed this so far...
poor hitomi...actually i don't feel as sorry for her as i do for Van ::grabs van-san plushie::
it's okay...it'll be better soon ::turns to Lehn:: right?
i hope you update soon, y'hear?
::giggle:: |
Reviewed By: KiTtTY On: October 30, 2002 06:22 CST
Comment/Review:
I like your fic so far =) pls update soon ok |
