| "Majin Hamtaro" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: SaiyanGirl On: January 24, 2003 12:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Arale:AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Evil!
Get away!!!!!!!!! (sceams high pithced)
Vegeta:(covers ears) geez baka! why are sceaming and what is wrong?!
Arale: EVIL HAMSTER!!!!!!!!!
Vegeta: huh?
Arale: in the story Hamtaro turns you, Goku and Shin into sunflowers! (starts to scream again)
Vegeta:(turns green and screams with her)
Hamtaro: "Kush Kush" Hey? why are screaming?
(Vegeta and Arale turns to the small Hampster,
hugs each other and screams): AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! EVIL HAMPSTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Someone save us!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: sailorrikku [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2002 22:43 CST
Comment/Review:
That is awsome! Make more chappters!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: CW On: December 11, 2002 12:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's good man!!!! |
Reviewed By: me On: December 07, 2002 16:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story plz write another chappy. |
Reviewed By: xan On: December 04, 2002 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is SOOO funny! Please keep writing! |
