Reviewed By: Jordan da Jedi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2002 11:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL very funny! I like that idea! A few things: One, you need to use pronouns allitle bit more, as wel as conjunctions. Two, Goku cannont use a Genki-dama (spirit bomb) in SSJ form, video game or not. Hes filled with too much rage. Other that that, good job. Keep writing. |
