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| "The Plotless Story" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 > » ] | Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 21:56 CDT
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BIG_DADDY: Okay, I think it's safe to say that most of the damage in my fic has subsided. AND I GOT A NEW FRIEND! (Arucard from Hellsing walks in) Arucard: Okay, exactly why did you bring me here? BIG_DADDY: To be apart of this fic! Arucard: I'm only bound to the Hellsing family you twit! Not some kid who thinks he's funny just because he writes some random off-the-wall stuff that makes no sense what so ever that is actually funny but I just don't see any humor. BIG_DADDY: Then how would you know it's funny if you don't understand it? Arucard: Uh... Internet? BIG_DADDY: Whatever.
| Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 17:36 CST
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BIG_DADDY: Alright, let us settle this right now! Gohan: And, might I ask, how? BIG_DADDY: By way of the "Z Treaty"! Gohan: What is that? BIG_DADDY: It states that I shall no longer make attempts to steal anyone's girl, even anime girls, and that I can only try and date single women. Gohan: Deal! (Signs treaty) BIG_DADDY: Uhh... you didn't let me finish speaking it. Gohan: What does the rest say? BIG_DADDY: Heh heh heh. It says that I am allowed to continue pursuing any anime girls that I like, even though it says that I am not allowed to steal them--which means I would be breaking the treaty... D'oh! Videl: Time to settle this once and for all! (Rips up the treaty, kicks BIG_DADDY in the shins repeatedly, and walks away with Gohan) BIG_DADDY: Oh well. I guess not everything works out the way you want it to. (Falls to the ground clutching his knees in pain) Anyway, put me in. I have a brown semi-afro, hazel-green eyes, I am 5' 8", and the rest is below in the last review I sent you. Update soon or I shall be forced to sic GRIZZLY BEAR on you or I shall torture you using my all powerful, VIRTUAL VIDEO GAME WORLD CREATING POWERS! *insert menacing laugh here*. Well, check out my fics when you get a chance. (The Z Gang returns and BIG_DADDY is forced to run for his life)
| Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 00:41 CST
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BIG_DADDY: I LOVED IT! VERY FUNNY! I WANT TO BE IN IN THIS! I can create virtual videoi game worlds where I am capable of controlling the programming. Plus, I can use the invincible, all powerful, and-for some reason-indestructable GRIZZLY BEAR! BWAHAHAHAHA *cough* There I go again. I ate too many bowls of Trix this morning and now I'm going psycho. I'm not sure who you should pair up. Umm... hold on... "geez I had it for a second. Gohan: Give it up you twit! BIG_DADDY: Quiet you! Gohan: Yes sir! BIG_DADDY: Umm... YES YES! PAIR ME UP WITH VIDEL... Gohan: PERVERT! BIG_DADDY: Oh GRIZZLY BEAR! (GRIZZLY BEAR appears from out of nowhere) Gohan: KAMEHAMEHA! (Gohan attacks GIRZZLY BEAR with the Kamehameha Wave. GRIZZLY BEAR gets pissed off) GRIZZLY BEAR: RRRROOOOAAAARRRRGGGGHHHH!!!! *BAM!* (GRIZZLY BEAR knocks his head off) BIG_DADDY: (Like Duffman) OH YEAH! (Does the splits but lands on his genitals and Gohan comes back to life) Gohan: SHE IS MINE AND MINE ONLY YOU BASTARD! BIG_DADDY: SHUT UP NERD FLANDERS! Besides my hair is more pimp-a-liscious than yours! I have an afro! Hercule: Just like me! BIG_DADDY: Except mine's cooler. Cooler: Did someone just say my name? Gunlord: No, he was saying his hair was a whole lot cooler than Hercule's. HErcule: That is so untrue! BIG_DADDY: Anyways, 'chibigokan', you think you could make this into something? I may sound like I'm going a little overboard, but hey, many authors go more overboard than me. And check out my fics sometime too. Auf Wiedersehen! (Good bye!) (Leaves to have sparrin session with Gohan)
| Reviewed By: Princess of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2003 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have one word for this fic.....HILARIOUS!!!!!
And as for the Yami Yugi pairing, please add my character, Taria(no relation to Tea). She has long, black, shoulder-length hair, lavender eyes, wears black boots, black short-shorts, black shirt and has two swords. Also Vegeta and Seto Kaiba are attracted to her.
Thanks, Princess of Darkness | Reviewed By: shadow_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2003 17:36 CDT
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YAMI!!!!!!!!!ILOVE YAMI!BUTILOVE YUGI MORE!PLEASELET ME BE WITH MY CUTE LITTLE BISHI!OH AND MY NAME IS SHADOW!AND A I HAVE BROWN SHOLDER LENGETH HAIR AND VIOLET EYES!OH AND I LOVE CANDY!IHAVE A HAMSTER NAMED CANDY!AND THIS IS COMPLETLY PLOTLESS!JUST THE WAY ILIKE IT!BYEEEEE!ANDPUT ME WITH YUGI!AND FOR YAMI PUT CHINXY WITH HIM!SHAEISMY BEST FRIEND!SHE HAS PRETTY PINK HAIR TIED INMEAT BALLS LIKE SERENAS HAIR ONLY TIED IN THEMIDDLE!SHE HAS RUBY EYES!AND LOVES YAMI!OKAY?AND REMEBER ME AND YUGI AND CHINXY AND YAMI!I HOPE!
OH AND ANOTHER THING YOU SHOULD MAKE TEA KISS SETO!AND MAKE HIM GO ON A DATE WITH HER!MWAHAHAHAH
AND THEN MAKE MARIE TRUNKS GETSENT TO THESHADOWQ RELEM!AND THEN HAVE CELTIC GAURDIAN KILL HER!IM AM SO EVIL!!!!!*laughs evily*MWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
OH AND CHINXY SAYS THE NEXT PLACE YOUPUT THEM SHOULD BE IN HUG HUG LAND!
my freinds and me:*shutter at the name* | Reviewed By: RedEyeDragon2478 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2003 00:13 CDT
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id like to be in as well | Reviewed By: MaujinVader(logged out) On: February 19, 2003 15:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
everything i expected and more!!!!! ok a few more things i need to say.
1) algus has a crossbow
2) can i have burning finger from G gundam. you know (this hand of mine is burning red. its loud roar tells me to defeat you. ERUPTING BURNING FINGER!!!!!!!!!!!!)
3) i really am maujinvader
4) i need a double sided red lightsaber so that way when joey touches mai i slice him up by saying this "VAZWING!"
5) it would make everyone in the story even more mad if after i kill all the tea's me and mai start making out. then i can kill joey by going lightsaberSSJ4
6) i need to go ssj4 and lightsaberSSJ4 many more times.
7) the truth behind me in the story (ps this isnt's real i swear) ive got a bounty on my head for 48,000,000,000,000 dollars thats trillion incase you didnt know. which is why i have said this.
8)put freiza in and make him a bounty hunter
9)i blow my gatling gun up when i destroy the tea's so thats why i needed the double red lightsaber
10) im a sayin in the story (forgot to tell you)
11) after the tea battle when me and mai "make out" my son comes. yes i did have a kid with mai.
12) my sons name is going to be velius
13) he also hates seto and mirai gohan
14) velius can only go lightsaberSSJ1
15) i really am maujinvader
16) velius is going to be picking on piccolo saying "why" all the time when he says shut up or something.
17) if anyone tells velius to shut up or to go to hell. i go lightsaber SSJ4 and blow that person out of oblivion. make it only that following (details at 18)
18) ash, seto, piccolo, mirai trunks, mirai gohan, and just cause i am pure blood evil. YAMI YUGI!!!!!!!! and i also kill whoever he is paired up with him becuse they call my son a bastard.
19) i really am maujinvader
20) thats it. update as soon as you can and i no lopnger say bus busta cap. after all i blow my gatling gun with about 20 boxes of C4 killing all the teas
21) oh yeah one more thing, the only reason me and mai had a kid is because when i started sobbing over the gatling gun i destroyed she said she would do something that would "take my mind off of it"
22) i really am maujinvader
23) that really is it. bye! and may the force be with you! | Reviewed By: SUGAR_BABY_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 21:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Konnichi wa! Can I be in? Please??? If so, can I glomp(or be attached to) Seto? Yes, I'm a Seto fan. u.u Description? I'm crazy, weird, crazy, crazy, and weird! Also, I am very annoying and I talk too much! n.n I annoy everyone I kn0w! Well, almost. Not my dad! O.O He'd kill me!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA*gasp* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!! | Reviewed By: SUGAR_BABY_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2003 18:57 CST
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Hey, can I be in? Pretty please? Pretty supercalafragelisticexpyaladocious please?
Yugi: You didn't need to say "Supercalafragelisticexpyaladocious".
Shut up! You just said it!
Oh, if you add me, can I cling on to Bakura and annoy everyone else? (mostly Tea and Yugi)
Yugi: Hey! Not me!
Yes you. Who wouldn't annoy you if you have some weird spikyish hair?
Yugi: .... | Reviewed By: Invader Kaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2002 20:06 CST
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Oh and i gotta add that Insane Kaiba kills alot of teas with the insaneness..it makes them insane and they kill themselves. | Reviewed By: RedEyeDragon2478 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2003 00:20 CDT
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opps.
anyways im 5'9 short brown hair, and am a rival to maujinvader
make me and him get into fights all the time
ive a double sided blue lightsaber
all black attire( thats clothing )
Ok then shadow_cat two can play at that game!
i want to be paired up with Sango (from inu-yasha)
much thanks
oh yeah me and miroku are best buds and i beat the living shit out of Ash if not im fighting with maujinvader were practicaly sworn enimies! well actually hes my neighbor the truth! | Reviewed By: Invader Kaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2002 16:32 CST
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OMG I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want tea to DIE BURN HER TO THE STAKE AND MAKE HER SCREAM AND ALL THE YUGIOH PEOPLE CELEBRATE HER DEATH AND SO DO HER PARENTS!!!!!!! And i want them in a pretty pink dresses thing!!! Add me pleassse Insane Kaiba yea my mediaminer things dif but Insane Kaiba wasalready taken >> oh yea..and Insane Kaibas well..INSANE.. | Reviewed By: yami bakura 2 On: December 30, 2002 14:04 CST
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fic is awesome. uh pair up yami yugi with kagome from inuyasha and make inuyasha beat the crap out of him. bye bye | Reviewed By: Karadaki On: December 27, 2002 20:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i never do seem to get bored of Plotless stories... still, quite humorous and...oh, watever, i cant use big words. ill just say wat i always say wen i like a fanfic....YAY!!!!! I LUV THIS FANFIC!!!!! | Reviewed By: MaujinVader [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2002 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
me in the fic, i'm honored. ok i'll tell you the discription
ok i'm about 5ft 8in, have a gatling gun and always says busta busta cap non stop when firing. make me always shoot seto whenever he talks. algus is from fft like you already know and if you haven't found him yet he's supposed to be 20, blond, and is really mean and selfish(that's how vegeta and him are friends) i hate future gohan and seto so i always try to shoot them. also on rare occasions i go SSJ4 when i'm mad or just feel like doing something besides busting caps. but my favorite character there is probably mai, shes actually one of the only normal people there.
so.........just for making everyone in the fic mad, can you pair me up with mai. that'll make EVERYONE MAD!!!!
thanks,
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