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| "Back in the Saddle" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: January 12, 2003 23:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HHHHmmmm,......are ya gona continue soon???.....please do,..this fic is Gooodd,...omi sure sounds piss at poor yotan Neee???...and aya comment on yohji-kun looking like a gay-cowboy is Sooooooooooo Fuuuuuunnnyyy,....*snickers*....*giggles*......^_~
hurry-up with the next one,....i can't wait to know if weis is gona working together again soon,...till then,..JAAAAAAAAA and GAAANBBATEEEE-NEEE!!^_^!! | Reviewed By: Forsaken [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2002 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this. Poor Yohji, even Aya laughed at him. *sighs* But he's still gorgeous in my book. Anyways, back to the fic. Great to see that Yohji's out of the hospital, although obviously still not in 'working order'. I hope that you continue this Gluhen storyline. I'd love to see what else you can come up with. ^_^ | Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2002 13:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Yochan,
Since you didn't have an email for me to link to... (and I don't know if addressing it here is kosher ... but what the heck)...
Yeah, it's meant to be a little tongue in cheek. I don't like the way Yoji is massacred design-wise, however, as I'm was writing this, I'm still thinking of Yoji and Aya as their original characters (or at least the way I like to write them). I describe the later looks because whether we like them or not, they have changed outwardly. I'd like to think I still write them with their old characterizations in tact.
Secondly, I wasn't trying to jump on the new WK solely to get ahead of anyone. I never sit and think to myself, "How can I get the jump on everyone else?" I write what comes to mind. I had recently seen the first two episodes of Gluhen and wondered where Yoji and Ken were (because they don't explain their absence at all). I throw the AU tag so no one will think anything I'm writing here is canon.
This was only meant to be a little ficlet, a scene or "day in the life" kind of thing. How did I not give the characters justice? Just curious. E-mail me: babaca@babaca.org | Reviewed By: Yochan On: November 04, 2002 23:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Is this supposed to be tongue and cheek? I'm sort of afriad to see a growing trend of fics that address the Gluhen designs. I'd rather see authors not address the changes...or at least not in a manner like this. I enjoyed the previous Gluhen fic much more. Your writing style is fine, but I'm not sure you give the characters justice. Congrats on getting ahead of the pack on Gluhen stuff though!
-Yochan |
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