| "... Lies Bleeding in my arms" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Sayiera [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2003 13:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
I didn't know Kenken could talk like that.. :)
PLease continue soon. |
Reviewed By: BaYbHiE_AnGeL On: July 30, 2003 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dis fic is so Damn F*ck**g GOOD!!!!!!!!!!
hope it'll be Youji-Ken at d end...
yeah!!! i LOVE those 2....
*waving youji-kenken banner*
keep on writing... |
Reviewed By: AolaniDathomir [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 01:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, yay, woo I like!! As much as I'd like to see Youji and ken work out, please let Schu and Ken work out!! Youji is a jerk in this fic, and I really, really like Schu! Write more very soon; you're writing is awesome! |
Reviewed By: Sadistic Lane On: July 27, 2003 22:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
"Got lube?" Hee! Had me cackling for fecking 15 minutes. Anyway, I'm really enjoying this AU! I do hope you continue soon, it's been ages since the last chapter. You're very good at hooking the reader in so they feel they NEED to know what happens next, and the story is paced well. Good one! |
Reviewed By: CaT On: June 21, 2003 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg that was soooooo good! *sobs for ken* THATS SO MEAN OF YOUJI!!!!!!! AHHHHH! BAD BAD JOUJI! *pokes him with a stick* *poke poke poke!* concidering english isn't your first language you did an awesome job. but one thing (i've seen alot of people do this so it's all good ^.^), you wrote (sry dont member where) "let him alone" (i think it was). it's generaly better to say "leave him alone". thats just the one thing i see alot of people write who's english is their second language. it's still a really good job! .> *pokes youji some more* he's gonna be nicer later right? right right right??? WWWWAAAAHHHHHH! i don't like it when yo-tan is mean to kenken! as for coples? i like youji/ken schu/aoi omi/nagi and ran/uhhhhhhhhhhh...farf??? hehehe ^^ it's all good however u put them. but...ur not gonna kill schu r u? *big watery omi eyes* o.o wahhhhhhhhhh! he's too coool to kill!!! hehehe ^^ wutever u do, im sure it will come out good. the story is great! keep it up!!! =^^=v |
Reviewed By: Jade Green On: November 16, 2002 22:41 CST
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K'so! Yohji is such a bastard, na no da!! *stomps her foot* I can't wait for the next chapter!! |
Reviewed By: schu-chan On: November 10, 2002 23:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*jumps on yohji, stomps on him does mexican hat dance on him claws at him w/ ken's bugnuks chokes him almost to death with his own wire* YOTAN, I CAN'T BELIEVE U HURT KENKEN THAT WAAAAAY!!!!!! *sob* im so disappointed in you, yohji... eheheheh. anyways, update soon, annahibiki-san! update soon with a long chapter, eheheh! |
Reviewed By: Jade Green [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2002 19:17 CST
Comment/Review:
*whimper* Poor Kenken.. *kicks dirt on Yohji* Bastard! I think Schu should go have a little.. "talk" with Yohji. Heh heh heh.. *evil grin* But please continue! Mainly because I want Yohji stomped into the ground. *nods* hehe |
Reviewed By: squeak On: November 06, 2002 10:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Woo! Woo! *sigh* I just love alternate universes...
PLEASE continue with this! You can't just leave it!
*squeak* |
Reviewed By: Jade Green [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2002 23:45 CST
Comment/Review:
Eeeee! This is so cuuuute! And except for a couple little things, your English is wonderful! I can't wait to see what happens next! What's Yohji going to do? Is Aya Yohji's brother who's gonna knock some sence into him? Eeeeee! *bounce* hurry! I don't wanna wait! |
