Reviewed By: fdcs On: May 02, 2005 06:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm...could have a lot more work done to this thing...although Shinji was rather in character, it still seemed pretty annoyiing how he pleaded out for his when he couldnt possibly doa thing about it...and this 'dream' thing I thought was quite unoriginal although it does provoke deep thoughts...perhaps the ending when Asuka finds Shinji screaming, maybe it shouldn't have been taken so humurously although it IS like Asuka to be like that...I think it shouldve been more serious. But a fair attempt in the end
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