Title: impylover
Reviewed By: kiki13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 00:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just loved it so much.espesally the part were Beelzemon is like"yeah well...love you to.Go to sleep!" cute!:) He acts all tough but in the inside hes a big softy:)I saw that it was toughing and kind when he decided to stay with them so they wont get scared if he wasn't. your good.Keep doing what you do best.
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