Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 13:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
;_; ::sobs:: What happened?! What happened? ::sobs::
Very itnersting start though... some of the scenes are clashing. Maybe I'm kind of confused with the structure and the format -_-' Very itneresting, but... he's not dead, right?! RAN IS NOT DEAD, RIGHT? KEN IS STILL UNCONSCIOUS, RIGHT?!!! Please coninue this fic. Seeing that this one is just a prologue... please continue the fic. I want to know what's going to happen next. |
