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| "New Rules, New Ruler" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Reviewed By: this thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 02:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know you wrote this nearly two years ago and probably don't remember it, but I had to congratulate you nonetheless. Your original characters were beyond incredible, and your plot was spotless (despite your protests). And you have, without a doubt, written the best Farfarello I have ever read. For once, someone who did not destroy him with blenders and idiocy. Even the fluff was great. And, as an additional amusement...when Farf stole the car you meant to write "Auf wiedersehen" but spelled it wrong. You wrote 'Auf wiedersein' 'Auf' means 'upon' in this case. 'Wieder' means 'again.' And 'sehen' means 'to see.' Usually you are saying 'Upon seeing you again.' But 'sein' means 'to be.' So it comes to something along the lines of 'Upon you existing again.' Horribly ironic considering he just killed the man. Though it was unintentional, I laughed for a solid 15 minutes. Peace, love, and props galore.
| Reviewed By: Cattu On: July 02, 2003 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! just wanted to say that I was uber impressed with this fic!
Like your other short fic (bitter something?) It was refreshingly light angst (most of the time) not that I don’t LIKE angst, don’t get me wrong, I’m big fan and all for the torturing of poor defenceless bishonen.
+ you also have a really v cool sense of humour! I couldn’t stop laughing ^^
( pretty embarrassing if your not on your own, but hey, it was worth it!)
Love the way you write Schwartz and Weiss (specially super sarcastic Schuldig, I LOVE his lines, can’t say it enough, one of the funniest fics I have EVER read!!!), all the characters were interesting and engaging (Nagi and Farfie are SO kawaii!!! Insane people RULE! ) and can’t wait to read the sequel + hopefully developments in the interactions between the two teams.
Grammar, plot and general writing style are all superb and length of fic seems about right, definitely not too long but begging for a sequel. Some of the telepathic communications and conversations did get a tad confusing, especially during Schuldig ‘death’ scene but otherwise can’t complain about anything and don’t really want to!
Oh, and more Omi+Nagi...please! | Reviewed By: femmedelalune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 14:29 CST
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I know you're unlikely to read this again, but xscaffiene, I offered a giftfic to the first person to review after I put up the epilogue, i.e. you, but I can't get teh site to give me any way of contacting you, i.e. email. If you do come by here again, let me know what you what or if you even what it.
Minerva | Reviewed By: Akari On: January 26, 2003 06:35 CST
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That was great!
I loved it muchly and am deffinately looking forward to more. *crosses fingers and hopes for more OmixNagi stuff in a sequel or side story*
Oh and more Brad too. *nods* must have more Brad Schu sappiness. | Reviewed By: xscaffeine On: January 25, 2003 12:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can never do those damn scores!
Anyway, I just wanted to say I've really been enjoying this, did not mind the sap or the Shakespeare and am glad you're planning a sequel. And yes my eyes are falling out having stared at the screen for 30 episodes!
xs | Reviewed By: xscaffeine On: January 16, 2003 16:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still chuckling over Schu outing Yohji and Weiss on the happy pills had me going for a minute ... I'm definitely looking forward to the next part! | Reviewed By: Yanagi-sen On: January 13, 2003 21:52 CST
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Yay you updated. Poor Nagi... freezing his nimble little fingers off... and Schu trapped in Farfie's head? ^_^ Can't wait for more! |
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