| "Yusuke Sleepwalking" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Sercer On: January 06, 2003 04:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Try to come up with your own plot next time and btw actually haveing the participants stay in character is always a plus. all in all i would say you need work a lot harder on your next fic. |
Reviewed By: Sercer On: January 06, 2003 04:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
well hmmm i do belive you are borrowing a plot from the cartoon ED, EDD, & EDDY. and in my opinion this story line does not translate well plus you have the character of hiei completly wrong |
Reviewed By: Fanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2002 20:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think Your fic is funny but you need to write more to make it funniner keep going |
