| "The Outcast" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: shawnm75h On: October 01, 2005 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked this its original it gies with everything
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Reviewed By: HaXx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 04:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the sexuall harrasment line (I would go to the forums and post that as a line you are proud of). Definently made me laugh aand gave me ideas.
Oh and to flame Moo Moo - it's not boring 5 year old. You just can't understand the plot, character devlopment, your brain can't handle it. A worthy winner of any contest keep it up! |
Reviewed By: moomoo On: July 10, 2003 09:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
BORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRING! |
Reviewed By: cd On: May 16, 2003 21:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
sequel sequel please? |
Reviewed By: starlight On: December 26, 2002 19:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
very good, i'm not a big fan of daikari, but I do like this story, keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: Leala On: December 14, 2002 22:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Bawls exceedingly* That *sniff* was so *sniff* wonderful!*stopps bawling* Ok The story was absolutly great! I loved it, and I noticed a lot of Dakari in there ^^'. I'm not the biggest ssupporter of Dakari because I'm more of a Takari fan *gets trampled by Dakari Fans* He He. Anyway the story was great and I think there should be a sequal about what happens to Davis and Kari through their journey in the Digital World and what happens after. Well I really enjoyed reading this and I look forward to reading other fan fics by you (are there any?). So Bonne Chance (Good Luck) in your wrighting. |
Reviewed By: Anthony On: November 14, 2002 15:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I already read this story on FF.net. But I felt like I should review here as well. It is one of the best digimon stories I have ever read. Not only was it original, but it was also enjoyable and went into great detail about what was happening.
It would be good to see a sequel to this story. If you indeed do a sequel for this, I have a pretty good idea that it will be as good as the original was. |
Reviewed By: Ucchan On: November 11, 2002 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is undoubtable my favorite Dejimon story ever. It is truly a great work of literature and the only thing I see in Silver's future is improvement! ^_^
The characters are very realistic and yet still true-to-the-series. I appreciated this the most. It was interesting to see how you decided to end the story, and while it wasn't as spectacular as I was hoping, it invoked real human emotion and I believe it was a very good way to end the story. However, if you ever get the urge to write on it more... I wouldn't complain! ^_~
Can't wait for your next gem!
-Ucchan |
Reviewed By: Steve Jester [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 10:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please note: I don't give perfect 10's often.
This is an outstanding fic. Front to back, it's one of the best I've seen. Thank you.
Steve Jester |
