| "Are you really an angel?" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Neko Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 20:07 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like it ^_^. I realliy hope you update soon.
P.S. here are ideas for pairs:
suno/yami
Seto/Shizuka(maybe)
Jou/Mai |
Reviewed By: Brockiepoo15 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! this is really cool!! i hope you continue!! please do!!
parings...pairings... uhh... emme think..
Suno-Seto -KAWAII!! Nai?
Jou-Mai
OR Suno-Yami??
i do not know... do what your heart contents!!
Keep it up! Write more!
-Brockiepoo15 PikaRppr1 =^_^= NYAA!! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: November 16, 2002 21:19 CST
Comment/Review:
This is pretty good so far. I think the title is okay as it is for now. As for pairings:
Jounouchi/Mai (perfect match)
Seto/Shizuka (just seems to be a good pairing)
Bakura/Suno (she seems to be able to handle herself well and would be able to handle him too)
You could do Yugi/Anzu but I don't think that that pairing would really fit the story. I think that Yami, Yugi, Tristan, and Tea should stay unpaired. |
Reviewed By: Red Phoenix On: November 15, 2002 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good...can be improved upon, but a good start.
Here are the pairs that I think ther should be;
Yugi/Anzu (there aren't *nearly* enough of those)
Jou/Mai (so meant for each other!)
Seto/Shizuka (they'd be SO kawaii!!!)
Suno/Yami (they sound like they'd be good together)
Okay, that's all. Bye!
The CRAZY and BEAUTIFUL,
Red Phoenix (AKA B-chan) |
Reviewed By: LilyStarLight2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 10:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CONTINUE PLEASE!!!!!!????????? |
