| "Creating A New Life" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: water On: June 22, 2003 21:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my god this story is so good I love the fact that serena is a graceful, elegant, beutiful and smart young women then a crybaby ditz. I especaly love that everyone nows who she really is. Please write more this is a killer story.
You also have great potential as a writer. |
Reviewed By: Sari On: February 26, 2003 12:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello, I think your story idea was original and entertaining but the writing was done poorly. A few rewrites and editors could make this story into a very enjoyable story.
-Sari
henkanokaze@yahoo.com |
