| "Reni's Dream" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Reni's Dream
Reviewed By: distantskyking On: October 21, 2003 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Comment/Review:
Gomen ne S*ugar* You're going to do much better than that don't get me wrong the storyline is good, but there are a lot of things you can and SHOULD change to make the story really interesting. I suggest that you read the story yourself very good and if you pay attention you will see what i mean and watch that spelling. Good luck and Sayonara distantskyking
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Reviewed By: ANO-SAN On: July 08, 2003 13:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
JADED ROSE IS RIGHT YOU SPELLED A WHOLE TON OF WORDS WRONG SO JUST GET THE SPELLING RIGHT AND YOUR STORY COULD IMPROVE.ALSO IT WAS KINDA BORING AND NOT REALLY CREATIVE. |
Reviewed By: Jaded Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2002 21:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Geeze, you spelled so many words wrong, didn't get any names right, and used bad grammar. I can't say that there was anything good about this story.
Jaded Rose |
Reviewed By: mystic On: November 16, 2002 14:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is great keep up the great job and your story will be even better!! |
