| "Pathetic" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: your story
Reviewed By: warbringer67 On: April 29, 2005 04:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it that much im giving you a ten for everything carry on with the story because ive just stoped reading it and it feels ages since i read it so hurry up with the next chapter
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Reviewed By: candy On: December 07, 2002 23:43 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like the story! You should check the english, but that is minor. You have a good plot and a good story. Please keep writing. |
Reviewed By: shadypony On: November 17, 2002 17:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Yes make a sequil. Please please. I liked it you did realy well for a first time fan fic writer. I did notice a few mistakes, but nothing to bad. I think you should keep up with the work. From what I can see so far you are a realy good writer. Please continue.
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^_^. Love and Peace
SHADY |
