| "What Should Have Been" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 14:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just realized you haven't updated this fic in nearly three and a half years. How disappointing, it's really quite good. Oh well, perhaps some day you'll get back to it.
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 13:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Combining Greek mythology with space goddesses and Japanese culture. It'll be interesting to see how you manage to keep the pantheons straight without ruffling any divine tail-feathers. Though I think you might have pissed off a whole bunch of Shinto Kami in making Zeus the supreme deity. Oh, and traditionally, Athena's eyes were grey, not violet.
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Reviewed By: Ryguy5387 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 17:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! Please please please please finish this story! *drops down on knees* PLEAAAAAAAAAAAASE! *sniffles* This is just soooooooooooooooooo good!
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Reviewed By: adam On: June 03, 2003 00:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
this sory is really good. i also read the side story that was good to. plz hurry and make new chapter..... |
Reviewed By: harry271 On: April 02, 2003 04:47 CST
Comment/Review:
CH 8 was great. How long until there is more,i want more now!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: harry271 On: March 23, 2003 15:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
more MORE NOW!!! |
Reviewed By: Starheart [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2002 18:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did a great job on this story, please, let me know when the next chapter is up. |
Reviewed By: anubis On: July 17, 2003 11:04 CDT
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come on man u got to update this fic it is really good. dont forget this fic. so UPDATE. |
