Reviewed By: silver ichigo dust On: November 28, 2002 20:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
not 2 mean ne offence or nethin...but y did u add an original character in ther?!? personally, i think i that i am speakin 4 most of the squinoa fanz that u shud make diz fic a squinoa. im not shur but i think that animes/games with the leading characters in love r pretty much reli reli popular! now, im not sayin that diz fic sux, but it is reli suspenseful n has a reli gud plot, but i seriously wished that it wuz a squinoa because ppl tend 2 think that new characters... well...not suck, but like...ther not as gud as the original characters cuz ppl r used 2 seein them 2getha n after a while, they kinda think that the pairingz r kute! bringin a new character wud kinda distort the story a bit...makin it less popular cuz i did do diz kinda fic b4 at fanfiction.net n it wuzn reli that popular but when i wrote a fic with leading characters as the pairings, the reviews went up quite a lot i must say. im not flaming this story, im juz giving u a bit of constructive criticism. but overall i think that dis story had a reli nice plot n yahz...newho update soon i gues |
