| "Serena's Bad Day" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Artic Fox On: December 29, 2003 15:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Loved your story so far. keep it up. its totally great. please update soon!!!! Ja'Ne
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Reviewed By: Heikgan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2002 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your evil.... i like that love the fic hope you update soon ^_^
Ja 'Ne |
Reviewed By: Eo On: June 27, 2002 00:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey very intertaining i would love to read more but for me to be able to do that u have to update so update soon k. I'll be checking for updates. Eo |
Reviewed By: usagi On: June 16, 2002 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is hilarious. finish the story, i can't wait.
this is the story where i can't stop laughing |
Reviewed By: Silver Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2001 14:20 CST
Comment/Review:
it's really great. i really can't wait till there's more!!! |
Reviewed By: Drina On: September 14, 2001 19:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE!! THIS WAS FUNNY~ |
Reviewed By: Rose On: September 24, 2001 00:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
One word:WOW!!! |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: September 28, 2001 02:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please fix the formatting. It's very annoying having to side-scroll in order to read a line. Also, try to refrain from author notes/comments within the narrative of the story. It's very distracting and would be along the lines of a movie director suddenly walking into the middle of a scene and explaining what you're seeing there just because they were afraid the audience wouldn't quite get it. |
Reviewed By: Iden's Garden (the author) On: September 28, 2001 14:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
To anonymous:
Hm...well, I went through the entire story, and it works FINE on my browser, no sidescrolling necessary...maybe you need to fix yours? And I'm sorry that you find my author's notes distracting...no offense, but they ARE in brackets for a reason. You're not required to read them. I'll see what I can fix up in the next chapters. |
Reviewed By: Ferny On: September 30, 2001 17:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey!! i really like this story, i hope you put up more soon |
Reviewed By: eThErEaLAnGeL On: October 27, 2001 10:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
heyhey! i read this story on FF.net and i loved it!(sucky that FF.net doesn't work now huh?) But i can't really remember the ending! >= So post up the next chapters soon!! the anonymous person who gave u that review is mean and is a coward! i've been seeing those kind of reviews all over this site. >= darn critics! double >= well on a higher note: DARIEN AND SERENA RULES!! =) |
