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| "Balance" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: athenemiranda On: June 16, 2003 09:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this on FFN just before they took it away, ;_;, and I don't think I ever commented on it before...anyway, I think it's wonderful and it's definitely my favourite WeiB fic ever. There's so much tension in it, the characters and relationships between them are fabulous, the plot is ingenious and twisted, and the whole story is very intense. I love the way everyone wants to kill and/or screw everyone else, it's insane and evil. The scene in the workout room was completely evil. The angst was fabulous.
I've read other bits of this arc but this is my favourite. Doth rock. ^^ | Reviewed By: Efadeh On: March 01, 2003 12:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Just a smal historical point to your fic:
The original japanies had had Red hair , later they mixed with other races and ...
but still , up to today,an small group of them maneged to keep the purity of thir race . this grup must live in the north of japan if I don`t mistake.
For more information check The history of Japan. |
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