| "Un-Serene" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Saturn On: August 10, 2002 19:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like it so far but I don't Serena should be with anyone either, the story would be better that way. |
Reviewed By: becky On: July 10, 2002 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
it really is funny,since usagi is a 5 year old until she finds the crystal don't you think she shouldn't be with anyone,but have adventures with them? Anywho please hurry up and write more chapters,I can't wait. |
Reviewed By: Starcatcher On: December 15, 2001 18:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so funny! I can't wait to read what happens next!!! Please hurry and write the next chapter!!! |
