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"The Freak" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ]
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 Reviewed By: Jedi [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 16, 2005 23:58 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great work, please update or post a sequel as soon as you can. You reaaly should use spell/grammer check though
 Reviewed By: Vicious7117  On: July 26, 2004 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I liked it! ^_^ Dracula and Jun...I never would have thought of that pairing. Originality is a major plus, there's not enough of that in the world. Although...I'm the original grammar-freak and the spelling of 'wear' in front of were- sort of irked me. But on the whole, very good and very original. ^^
 Reviewed By: seadragon1012  On: November 14, 2002 16:19 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Love it!!! I read part of this before but didn't get to read this much.I was looking for mouths! I'm glad I found it! This has to be one ove the most origanl fics I'v ever read. Pleaese wright more!!!
 Reviewed By: seadragon1012  On: November 14, 2002 16:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Love it!!! I read part of this before but didn't get to read this much.I was looking for mouths! I'm glad I found it! This has to be one ove the most origanl fics I'v ever read. Pleaese wright more!!!
 Reviewed By: Silva Noir [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 14, 2002 20:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
ch 3 and 4... reading these I have the impulse to start waving my fist in a circle in the air and holler "Jerry! Jerry! Jerry!"
 Reviewed By: Silva Noir [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 14, 2002 20:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
not bad. (only read the first 2 chapters) but now I've got that stupid disco song in my head "I like the night life, I like to boogie" damn you VH1 "one hit wonders" and "where are they now" for playing that annoying line over and over. DAMN YOU!!!!

and wear-creatures? is that like fur coats? lol.

anywho... Jun and Dracula.... uh, interesting pairing
 Reviewed By: slick04  On: June 27, 2002 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
Splicing too many animes. Dracula is European based. What happen to the digimon?
It's weird but I'll work on some levels, not all.
I'll be waiting to see what happens next
 Reviewed By: Nikita  On: June 27, 2002 01:04 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I thought it was really good! I am not really into the whole Digimon thing but i could follow it, it had me clinging to the end of my seat!I wouldnt introduce new characters so late in the story, and if i did i would DESCRIBE them more, otherwise it was fine. Plus what i really liked was that a guy would write romance... renewed my faith in male authors.
 Reviewed By: Shimegami  On: February 27, 2002 22:02 CST
Comment/Review:
You have a few minor grammatical errors, but it's an interesting plot. Besides having an un-bashed Jun, it introduces an interest-piquing character. I like. ^_^
 Reviewed By: GameGirl [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 06, 2002 22:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Aw, she was bit by a dracula. How romantic. :) You dork...you had me beliving in the beginning of the chapter that they were going to...well...you know... *blushes* great!
 Reviewed By: GameGirl [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 06, 2002 22:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Dude! Where did I leave off? Did I read ch 6? I thought I did!! The reviews don't say!! Oh, well, great job, Brian! :) I'm gonna start to upload some of mine here now and see if I can get some reviews. Wow...you got a lot of reviews here... I'm so proud of you! *kisses*
 Reviewed By: Kaden Z Fukuyama [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 29, 2002 10:38 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Pretty Damn good. So I guess that means if the ASHITA universe ever collided with the Freak universe... Jun AND Dai could become Bat creatures. A+ Digi.
 Reviewed By: YamaiTaitosdaughter [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 28, 2002 15:57 CST
Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!! thats neat.. about the pure blood and everything.... can't wait for the next chapter... this is getting pretty suspenseful... and it still kicks ass!!!!
 Reviewed By: Misty Wildfire  On: January 24, 2002 22:43 CST
Comment/Review:
awww how cute!!! ehehehe love it!!!
 Reviewed By: TG the Hyper Joshin  On: January 24, 2002 21:23 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
I gave you the five because I think you could inprove on details and some grammer. But other than that it was a great story and I look forward to the next chapter.

Sean *Biggerstaff*: Tg?

TG: Yes?

Sean *biggerstaff*: Remember what you said you would do to him for insulting HP.

TG: *smirks and throws a bucket of cold water on Brian, the bucket being filled with cursed drowned Jun water*
There.

Sean: YES! *Calls the water company and shuts off brian suply of water for a week* Muahahahaha!
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