|"The Freak" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ]|
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| Reviewed By: Artemis Blink On: November 25, 2001 19:10 CST|
this was a rad story. write more!
| Reviewed By: Mimi On: September 12, 2001 01:37 CDT|
| Reviewed By: DarkGatomon On: September 13, 2001 00:54 CDT|
Very cool! Ooh, the suspense is killing me... what's going to happen with Tom?! I hadn't been expecting a new character so soon, that's neat... Hope you write more soon, this is my favorite of your stuff!
| Reviewed By: Misty Wildfire On: September 13, 2001 22:57 CDT|
Hey buddy!! that was great!! I loved it!!!
| Reviewed By: TG the Hyper One On: September 13, 2001 23:18 CDT|
TG: YOU know damn well who this is. I just wanted to say how cool it was.
Davis: Will you ever.........shut up....
TG*pulls out a hooker outfit* Dun test meh.....
| Reviewed By: Darkstar On: October 25, 2001 16:11 CDT|
Surprising........you win man. Totally shocked. Couldn't take the pressure. Anywho, looks good. Keep going!
| Reviewed By: Misty Wildfire On: October 25, 2001 19:00 CDT|
OOOOOOOooooooooooooooaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh hehehe loved it!!!!! i cant wait for the next chapter!!! yeah^^
| Reviewed By: DarkGatomon On: October 25, 2001 21:15 CDT|
Hey, awesome chapter! This was great fun... can't wait to see what happens next! Please keep writing, it's a great story. ^_^
| Reviewed By: Loki On: October 26, 2001 01:12 CDT|
Hmmm. Nice use of mythical lore in a modern age anime series. Could vary character reaction a little more and add more in the intro, but overall I would say it was good. May want to consider draging it out a little more, add a little more suspence, but that's up to you.
Nice interaction of modern age themes with the disproving of myths brought on by a one time story. Logical series of events (Which is rare in many fanfics) and excellent use of an otherwise vague character.
| Reviewed By: TG! On: October 26, 2001 17:16 CDT|
TG:I am the goddess of Pixi stix!
Sora: Digifan! she is on a sugar rush again! O.O
Davis(in a dress):Help me!
TG:NU! YOU REMAIN IN THAT DRESS! DIGIFAN! THAT KICKED!MORE!MORE!MORE!
| Reviewed By: Jodi S. (Mimi, Myself, & Iz.) On: October 27, 2001 15:05 CDT|
Woah! Neato! Really cool continuation (Chapter 6)of the Freak. Nice little crossover with Gunsmith Cats. Hmmm... Oni? I wait to read what happens next! ~ Jodi
| Reviewed By: Fyres' Rage On: October 27, 2001 16:54 CDT|
OHhhhhhhhAHHHHHHhhhhhh new characters scary!!!
| Reviewed By: Kaden Zendi Fukuyama On: October 29, 2001 16:10 CST|
I really liked this chapter and thanks for the credit... but y'know how I feel about crossovers. Other wise VERY VERY GOOD
| Reviewed By: Shadow Guyver 007 On: November 06, 2001 15:00 CST|
Good chapter, although a bit tacked together in some places. Still, very good. I give it 7/10.
| Reviewed By: Haley On: November 11, 2001 17:26 CST|
Brian, that was awesome! Did you do research for this because I didn't know all that Oni and demon stuff! Pretty cool!
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