| "In The Most Innocent Of Places" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: evenstar On: January 01, 2003 00:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is a great fic!!!! please update soon! don't keep me in suspense!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: inususu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2002 11:23 CST
Comment/Review:
oooh i love a scary ending to a chappy!*gives pervincia a stolen vanilla coke* BUT THE REST ARE MINE! now everyone sing the this was a great story by a very talented person who gots a stolen vanilla coke because it ended all scary like song! |
Reviewed By: crz On: November 29, 2002 08:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story please up date soon |
Reviewed By: SpaceCherry On: November 26, 2002 21:16 CST
Comment/Review:
i love the story it's very good please keep writing |
Reviewed By: kagome On: November 26, 2002 18:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey no afenct but i think you need more in your chapters they are kinda to short but other wise it was fine.!!. |
Reviewed By: inususu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2002 21:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pretty good way better than anything i could do!
it would be better if you update. O.O thought i wouldnt say that huh? WELL YOU WERE WRONG! * runs around stealing vanilla cokes* muhahahahahhaha |
Reviewed By: hopuchan On: November 25, 2002 00:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is a great fic! can't wait for more chapters. please update often!
^__^ |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Conga Line [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2002 23:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BWAHAHAHHAHA! You thought you'd get away from my reviews, but you were wrong! you'll never be free! NEVER! dun dun dun. see, this is where I go crazy cuz of caffine, WHEE! REVIEW TIME! so, you'd see that sky today? Talk about GRAY AND FULL OF SNOW! YEAH BABY! BRING ON THE SNOOOOOOWWW!!!! *sings the 'think we should rob them' song* bwaha, i'm addicted to that thing. cuz it's so damn funny! Anyways, great chapter, and you most post more soon! I love your idea, and the originality kicks ass. you do realize however, that I must now make my story kick your story's ass. BWAHA! (do stories even have asses? O.o;; let's not go there.) nah, just kidding. keep up the awesome work k-chan. I'm loving it! *randomly busts into playing air guitar* |
