| "Vanilla" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Conorgirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2003 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this story immensely. It was a truly lovely, lovely fic. I really think that you wrote both Aya and Ken very closely to their characters.
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Reviewed By: Aki On: July 30, 2003 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg.. that was so beautiful ;_;... :: close to tears :: I never really enjoyed the opinions of other yaoi fans placing Aya and Ken together... but by reading this fic, I'm in full support xD That was the most sweetest and cutest thing! ~.~! I love your stories! |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2003 20:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
O.O Wow! That was so darn sweet. Nice story. Not bad, but quite interesting with the ice cream in it. ^_^;; Nice work! |
Reviewed By: Priscilla On: June 07, 2003 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an awesome fic! The sensuality of it had me breathing heavy and craving vanilla ice cream! I really loved that you approached this from Aya's POV since it was nice to see the internal struggles he went through before approaching Ken. Very well done! |
Reviewed By: alexander gray On: May 15, 2003 21:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
i can't believe that was a first! it was so good... made me craving for vanilla ice cream... |
Reviewed By: Xellas M. [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 11:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yummy! Aya was fabulously hot - an extremely well written and steamy lemon. I think I need a cold shower now... |
Reviewed By: Angel~Rinoa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 20:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
* dances around with Aya and Ken plushies* SSOOOOOOOOOOO CUUUUUUUUUUTE!!! Onegai, Great-One, please make another story!!!! Tee-hee! This is a classic in my category of WK yaoi. Keep up the great work!!!
- Angel ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Purplepenguin On: February 10, 2003 13:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very sweet and great and everything, and even better considering it was your first Yaoi lemony fic. |
Reviewed By: Amy the Yu On: December 28, 2002 01:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be the first WK fic that I could honestly give 10's all around. That was sooo good and cute and absolutely mushy. ^_^
I'm a huge closet sap fan and that was so sappy and I loved every minute of it. Oh, the mush, the MUSH!!!
;_; "My tears are overflowing" (Excel Saga quote), but they're tears of joy after reading a great ficcie. I'm in love...so CUTE!
PEACE OUT =) |
Reviewed By: PikaChan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2002 12:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
x3 Daaa, I like I like *bounce* ^_^ You are a very good writer; your descriptions literally painted images into my head. I also *adore* Aya x Ken, and the whole fic was inspired by Vanilla... x3 One of my favorite songs! All in all, this is a VERY good fic. ^_^ I really enjoyed it!~ |
Reviewed By: Carter Tachikawa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2002 11:24 CST
Comment/Review:
Hmmm, I read this somewhere else and I still love it. Good old RanKen-ness. I hope you get the little comment I posted in your journal. Keep writing.~CT |
Reviewed By: CasualOtaku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2002 22:57 CST
Comment/Review:
You sure that's a first? Good gods, that was great for an experienced author. I'm soo jealous now, it took me forever to be able to write yaoi.
Now I'm going to be thinking of Ken every time I have a hot fudge sundae...oh well, it's worth it. Verry yummy fic. Hope to see you here on a regular basis. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Akari On: November 27, 2002 06:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Good stuff ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Rhythm [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2002 22:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Heheh! long live RanxKen lemon yaoi! |
Reviewed By: Xara On: November 26, 2002 15:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey babe! What a great first lemon. I always knew that the Yaoi would show through (one day the het will end, and yaoi will prevail). Forgive the strange mood, but its late and im reading smut. Talk to you later babe! |
