| "Shinobu, Ai Dake" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: wow
Reviewed By: killerman83ca [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2007 12:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I don't know what to say but wow.
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Title: dang
Reviewed By: brimstonephoenix On: July 02, 2004 03:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
DANG DUDE... cute shinobu some slack with motoko.. Motoko loves shinobu more then anyone else she would never point her sword at her.. and not only that if Shinobu is 16 then Motoko would be around 20 somethin... she's feminin by then
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Reviewed By: sanzo-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2003 03:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's nice..update! i'll be waiting for the next chapter! ^-~
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Reviewed By: maico On: January 12, 2003 20:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
its got a really nice story n every thin but i dont like how u changd her hair and alittle bit of her attitude but i would understand if u gave more of somthing like a prolouge to it saying that she had problems wit school or what ever and she died her hair or what not n e ways great job! |
