| "Humanity" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: YamaiTaitosdaughter [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2001 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT!!!!! OOOHHHH! this was sooo cool... now i wanna know what happens next!!! whats with togepi being "the one" why is delilah so important, whats with the dreams..... I WAN MOREEEEEEE!!!!! adventure, romance and all that other good stuff!!! |
Reviewed By: DarkGatomon On: November 29, 2001 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, cool! I really like them going to school, that was nicely addressed and everything. Very good. Spelling is always an issue, but it wasn't too bad. Um, I liked this, and... write more!! |
Reviewed By: Michelle Samiyo On: November 29, 2001 16:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey I'm busy now so I'll reveiw n read later.
~Michelle Samiyo |
Reviewed By: Jodi S. (Mimi, Myself, & Iz.) On: November 29, 2001 02:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All right! It keeps getting better! Now love seems to be blossoming between Pokemon, Humans, and a Soldier. Really nice! Really neat concept of Pokemon becoming Human and the society they must endure. In other words... SCHOOL! Excellent work! I can't wait for more! Still more surprises (grins) to see!
~ Jodi |
Reviewed By: YamaiTaitosdaughter [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2001 16:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
TOGEPI AND B.R.Y.A.N SITTIN IN A TREE!!! K-I-S-S-I-N-G!!!!!! I like this ficcy! |
Reviewed By: Misty Wildfire On: November 27, 2001 21:56 CST
Comment/Review:
WOW!!!!! that was great!!!!! i'm very impressed ^^ that's sooo good!!!! i mean ..yeah that's great gettin better every chapter..love the little romance thingys goin on hehehe ttyl!!! |
Reviewed By: pyrokinatic On: November 27, 2001 21:40 CST
Comment/Review:
you sertainly are good at cliff hangers... but it is good action romance its like a romeo and juliet modern day street thing.... but hey it works.. you got me hooked |
Reviewed By: SSJ5 Majin Jarkota On: November 27, 2001 21:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Good fic, my man. Togepi in love with a cyborg? B.R.I.A.N. in love with a Pokemon? Interesting storyline, although you REALLY misspelled Raticate and Drowzie. I'm guessing you've never played the games,right? Good fic, though. |
Reviewed By: Misty Wildfire On: September 16, 2001 23:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Heya! thats really cool!! hope to read more of it soon! |
Reviewed By: Jodi (Mimi, Myself, & Iz.) On: September 30, 2001 23:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great story! I love the whole Dad and Mom bit with the Pokemon. Hopefully more soon! Great work! Jodi. |
Reviewed By: Pyro On: November 04, 2001 22:54 CST
Comment/Review:
it has a nice and jumpy plot. makes it hard to follow but it is good. cant wait to see the next part. |
Reviewed By: katie ichijouji On: November 11, 2001 11:42 CST
Comment/Review:
LOL..pikachu and chikorita can dance better than ash and misty... what is that about mrs. ketchum and what happened at the dance! WAAAAAHHH *crosses arms* i hate To Be continueds... 'specialy when they end like that.. great fic though... im just in a bad mood cause every goood fic i've read to day has ended in a cliffhanger... i want moooooooore |
Reviewed By: Jodi S. (Mimi, Myself, & Iz.) On: November 13, 2001 15:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Cool! Yeah! It's been a long time since I've read Humanity! (courtesy of the ever so realiable FF.net) I really enjoyed it! It makes me want to watch Pokemon again! I hope more is on the way! Great work, Brian! ~ Jodi |
Reviewed By: TG the hyper Joshin! On: November 18, 2001 23:34 CST
Comment/Review:
DUN DUN DUN!!!!!!!!Pretty good! GO WWF!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Jodi S. (Mimi, Myself, & Iz.) On: November 19, 2001 15:08 CST
Comment/Review:
WOw! Another gripping chapter to Humanity! Yikes! R.Y.A.N.'s? Cool! I can't wait to read the next part! Hopefully B.R.I.A.N. can kick some R.Y.A.N butt... (sweatdrops) Oh well, please continue! ~ Jodi |
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