| "Humanity" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jodi S. (Mimi, Myself, & Iz.) On: November 29, 2001 02:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All right! It keeps getting better! Now love seems to be blossoming between Pokemon, Humans, and a Soldier. Really nice! Really neat concept of Pokemon becoming Human and the society they must endure. In other words... SCHOOL! Excellent work! I can't wait for more! Still more surprises (grins) to see!
~ Jodi |
Reviewed By: YamaiTaitosdaughter [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2001 16:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
TOGEPI AND B.R.Y.A.N SITTIN IN A TREE!!! K-I-S-S-I-N-G!!!!!! I like this ficcy! |
Reviewed By: Misty Wildfire On: November 27, 2001 21:56 CST
Comment/Review:
WOW!!!!! that was great!!!!! i'm very impressed ^^ that's sooo good!!!! i mean ..yeah that's great gettin better every chapter..love the little romance thingys goin on hehehe ttyl!!! |
Reviewed By: pyrokinatic On: November 27, 2001 21:40 CST
Comment/Review:
you sertainly are good at cliff hangers... but it is good action romance its like a romeo and juliet modern day street thing.... but hey it works.. you got me hooked |
Reviewed By: SSJ5 Majin Jarkota On: November 27, 2001 21:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Good fic, my man. Togepi in love with a cyborg? B.R.I.A.N. in love with a Pokemon? Interesting storyline, although you REALLY misspelled Raticate and Drowzie. I'm guessing you've never played the games,right? Good fic, though. |
Reviewed By: Misty Wildfire On: September 16, 2001 23:31 CDT
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Heya! thats really cool!! hope to read more of it soon! |
Reviewed By: Jodi (Mimi, Myself, & Iz.) On: September 30, 2001 23:43 CDT
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Great story! I love the whole Dad and Mom bit with the Pokemon. Hopefully more soon! Great work! Jodi. |
Reviewed By: Pyro On: November 04, 2001 22:54 CST
Comment/Review:
it has a nice and jumpy plot. makes it hard to follow but it is good. cant wait to see the next part. |
Reviewed By: katie ichijouji On: November 11, 2001 11:42 CST
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LOL..pikachu and chikorita can dance better than ash and misty... what is that about mrs. ketchum and what happened at the dance! WAAAAAHHH *crosses arms* i hate To Be continueds... 'specialy when they end like that.. great fic though... im just in a bad mood cause every goood fic i've read to day has ended in a cliffhanger... i want moooooooore |
Reviewed By: Jodi S. (Mimi, Myself, & Iz.) On: November 13, 2001 15:35 CST
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Cool! Yeah! It's been a long time since I've read Humanity! (courtesy of the ever so realiable FF.net) I really enjoyed it! It makes me want to watch Pokemon again! I hope more is on the way! Great work, Brian! ~ Jodi |
Reviewed By: TG the hyper Joshin! On: November 18, 2001 23:34 CST
Comment/Review:
DUN DUN DUN!!!!!!!!Pretty good! GO WWF!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Jodi S. (Mimi, Myself, & Iz.) On: November 19, 2001 15:08 CST
Comment/Review:
WOw! Another gripping chapter to Humanity! Yikes! R.Y.A.N.'s? Cool! I can't wait to read the next part! Hopefully B.R.I.A.N. can kick some R.Y.A.N butt... (sweatdrops) Oh well, please continue! ~ Jodi |
Reviewed By: DarkGatomon On: November 19, 2001 16:31 CST
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Ooh, that was fun! I'm glad you made Togepi so strong, that's cool. Fun chapter, good job! |
Reviewed By: pyrokinatic On: November 20, 2001 22:31 CST
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well so far you got the cliff hanger going. im reading and reviewing faster than you can make them!!. but you do have a good thing going. keep it up. and by the way it togepi and scizor just for future reference.. |
Reviewed By: Mimi, Myself, & Iz. [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2001 01:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NEATO!
Again great chapter! Lots of action as Togipi and B.R.I.A.N. encounter more R.Y.A.N.s. Now even more strange are revealed as a new mysterious entity has identified Togipi as the one! I can't wait for the next part! How does the voices in Ash, Broks, and Misty's dreams mean? Great writing!
~ Jodi |
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