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Reviewed By: Aisuru Hito On: July 27, 2025 22:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The ending feels like a bit of a cop-out but all is well that ends
well I suppose.
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Title: Holy-Cheese-On-Toast!
Reviewed By: VampLuvah [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 14:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa! This fic was even better than 'The Pharaoh's Gift'! And I swear by that fanfic, so that's saying a lot! I was so happy with the endings in each fic! And I'm really glad that Yami and Ryou broke up. Yami just needs to stick with one person...sorry. I love reading the (very few) Ryou/Bakura/Malik fanfics. They are so cute. Damn, two Yamis and one Hikari...::shiver:: oh, the possibilities...Damn! Now you've given me an idea for a fanfic! I've got enough to write! ...::looks at how long of review was written:: Holy-Cheese-On-Toast! As you can tell that is my favorite saying. Well, guess I'd better cut this review short with saying: YOU SO TOTALLY ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 07:48 PST
Comment/Review:
soooo beautiful, you're a fabulous writer and I enjoyed this story very very much.
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Reviewed By: jgal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 18:22 PST
Comment/Review:
it's a nice fic... but... poor malik had to live with those memories...
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 13:24 PDT
Comment/Review:
Dark, angsty, passionate... I love your stories, and this one is no different! I love your fics, they always have so much imagination and detail!
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Reviewed By: hanyou rogue On: August 11, 2004 17:44 PDT
Comment/Review:
It's really great!!! I read "Pharaohs Gift" and I think this a great sequel!!! Keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Yunegoddessdancer On: March 04, 2003 15:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Loved it keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Yuki On: February 21, 2003 15:07 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everything fits! The Pharoes gift. Then this. Its all great!
Bakura:Yuki! We have to go now.
Ryou:This story is great!
Yuki:I know! ^_^
Marik:Yukiko! I thought you were ready! We have to go!
Bakura:Say Konnichi wa Yukiko!
Yuki:Konnichi wa Yukiko.
Bakura:-_-0
Marik:-_-0
Ryou:^_^0
Yuki:What? You told me to say it!
Marik: *grabs Yuki and throws her on his shoulder*
Ryou: I want to stay!
Bakura:-_-0 * does the same to Ryou*
Ryou and Yuki: Awww! I want to stay! Oh well! Ja ne!
Bakura and Marik: You going to be late for dueling lessins! You dont want to keep Yami waiting!
Ryou and Yuki: *blushes* Ummm.... Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 03:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I kinda read both stories completely tonight so I am just now getting around to posting a review. This is awesome, there is no other word for it. some of the ideas you use are so original I have never seen them in any other fics in any genre. so Kudos to you! wait I ate my last Kudos bar earlier, Kuso! so you'll just have to settle for Pocky! wonderful writing please continue! |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2003 06:16 PST
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*pingpong* A well rounded story, but Pharaoh's gift was way better.
*YamiPP* -_-
*HikariPP* She wouldn't let us in on her real veiw of the story, which means....O.O
*AibouPP* She has ideas for another story! We're gonna die we're gonna die we're gonna die /takes a breath/ I'm gonna throw up then we're gonna die!
*pingpong* ~_~ |
Reviewed By: Shaina Carney On: December 30, 2002 07:59 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it and I can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 18:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*reads chapter 12 again* oo i love a firey ryou! so adorable! *goes to the next chp* |
Reviewed By: Seto Kaiba 15 On: December 24, 2002 08:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Exilent I lovvveeeddd it!!!!
I love your stories, keep up the good work! ~_~ |
Reviewed By: Shaina Carney On: December 18, 2002 18:33 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it and I can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Borath [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 13:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first and probably only Yami-bastardization fic that I have ever been able to read. Thanks for giving him an excuse near the end there, and hell yes I feel sorry for him! He's one of my favourite characters. I've actually read this having only read about 2 chapters of the prequel. Told you I can't read Yami-bastardization. Kinda hooked now as I want to know what happens. Good luck with the rest of this! |
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