| "Dragon Morphs: A Digimorphs Tale" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Title: tsk
Reviewed By: Dray On: September 09, 2003 01:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
My apologies for that large-blocked mess, it doesn't seem to convert paragraphs automatically. Nor do I seem able to edit the comment..a shame, but a lesson for the future nonetheless. *mutters something about lack of preview as well* |
Title: Intriguing story, interesting sources
Reviewed By: Dray On: September 09, 2003 01:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quite an engrossing story you've weaved here Nightdragon. I personally enjoy the original twist of having the main characters actually be the Digimon/dragons, it's a refreshing break from the children who usually star in such fics. Though you may have gone perhaps a little far with the Sekata abuse, that's a personal opinion, it may have been quite necessary to maintain the flow of the storyline. (Currently beginning chapter 20, though I'll likely have to finish another time)
I am a touch surprised at the lack of acknowledgement for the sources to certain story arcs, not so much the situational humor snatched from various cartoons and the like, but the larger scenes taken nearly verbatim from various anime/shows. Sekata paralyzed as a dragon, borrowed from the anime Dragon Drive(something so out of place I never expected it to be seen as part of a different storyline, but there it was. Good job on that. ^_^), or Future Tense, the name and basic plotline being borrowed from the series Gargoyles (another show with an interesting blend of original stories that never received enough attention). In case I made the wrong impression a moment ago, I'm not making the case of an accusation, rather I'd be interested in knowing the sources for some of these larger arcs, as I'm fairly sure there are others, those just stick out most obviously in my mind from having seen the aforenamed series (which anyone who enjoys this well-written story likely would, with the possible exception of the Goliath Chronicles or the last 8 or so episodes of Dragon Drive -_-;;)
All in all, you have a solid writing style and a keen eye for interweaving plotlines, that are nevertheless comprehensible enough to keep the reader caught up without undo confusion or backtracking as can sometimes happen. If you've written more (particularly more involving dragons*cough* >_>) I'll be looking to check them out soon after I finish this.
Regards. |
Reviewed By: dark angel of the night [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2003 04:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
will he write more? will he get bored? i'm hoping for the second option, this is actually quite good
(i would have slashed an impmon card personally, that or blackagumon) |
Reviewed By: shadow On: July 18, 2003 17:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
long time whithout read jour job
you have improved the plot and the fun
since the last review, long time ago
its good to read you again
keep going whit it
this fic is awesome |
Reviewed By: XrenamonX [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 01:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
[prev review:7th]
HI
I've been following your story for a long while now, and I come to check up on it again... and I see an update, woohoo! Well anyways, your story is flowing along nicely, plot twists are nice aren't thay? ^-^ Well anyway good fic, keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Jareth On: June 03, 2003 15:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
spelling and grammar is just a tad off, but hey I've seen worse, (ex. "yo man wht up? my budah?" and continues on like that thrugh the story) anyways This is one of the best fanfics I've read so far in my budding life. So in conclusion WRITE MORE PLEASE!!! |
Reviewed By: Solo_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2003 18:15 CDT
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Question: How does a Japanese guy know about Star Wars when it was never released in Japanese.
Sorry, I have an addiction to Star Wars, but the fic is really good. |
Reviewed By: power of renamon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 08:26 CST
Comment/Review:
This fanfic is the best, I like all of your chapters. Please make chapter 17 , I want to find out what happened to Jan. |
Reviewed By: neosaber On: March 22, 2003 16:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am dieing to know how this story is going to go on. Please write right on !!!
your character are designed great (goog profiles) |
Reviewed By: Renamon On: March 19, 2003 17:15 CST
Comment/Review:
wow, this story semeed to get a lot of feed back since i posted, wow!
well anyway i just needed to post something -_- |
Reviewed By: Darcy335 On: March 18, 2003 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*SIGH*
For morale boosting you say? Well... How bout' this?
I really really really really really really like your story! And maybe you can try to do the next chapter on weekends or something... Cuz' I really like your story! I can't wait! But until then... *sigh* I MISS THE STORY! I MUST READ MORE! |
Reviewed By: darcy335 On: March 15, 2003 19:23 CST
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Nightdragon0... if u are having a hard time thinking about what should be put in the 16th chapter... do u need help? u could always ask me!
just if u need help on it... thats it! no offence!
plz dont take any offence... if u take offence... here... take this crome digizoid hammer and use it on me! |
Reviewed By: darcy335 On: March 15, 2003 19:19 CST
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Well... Nightdragon0... are u working on the 16th chapter? |
Reviewed By: Darcy335 On: March 15, 2003 16:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! Double posted! |
Reviewed By: Darcy335 On: March 15, 2003 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey... Sorry I couldn't tell u my email address just yet...
Nightdragon0... I've done quite a bit on the logo! I can give u a description!
To the left is a white d-ark... with the screen saying d-ark!
In the middle is a logo saying
___________
| Digimon |
| |
|Dragon Morphs|
| |
|A Digimorphs Tale|
Then there's Jan's red d-dragon on the right! Isnt that cool?! |
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