| "Nightmares: Part I of the Guardian Saga" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Alee Ctt On: January 04, 2002 22:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ya know what your writing really took off after that first chapter. Really it did I mean absolutely amazing. Yes you may be morbid but you are morbid in a good way and you say it so that it is oh i cant think of the word i want to use but you should know how great of a writer you are.............. WHEN IS IT GOING TO BE CONTINUED BECAUSE IT SEEMS AS THOUGH IT WILL BE!
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Reviewed By: Alee Ctt On: January 04, 2002 22:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
teh reason i only gave it a six is because it could have been more explicit. For example what she thought of for each person and why. I believe it would have been more interesting but it was a pretty good first chapter! |
