| "Bahamut & the Guardian Forces" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Last Knight Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 01:22 CDT
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Totally awesome! The only bad thing I can say is...... YOU MADE ODIN A FREAKING IDIOT! Other than that little tidbit of information, this is probably the second best FF fanfiction I have ever read. Oh, yeah, You needed more Bahamut Zero, too. And, Fat Chocobo.
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Title: I see where you're going
Reviewed By: Shadow of Doom On: May 01, 2004 14:45 CDT
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I see where you're going with this whole sword thing. I can pretty well guess that the entire party will eventualy get a sword. I just want to say that that's cool, and I also believe you should wedge Frostmourne in somehow.
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Title: One more thing
Reviewed By: Shadow of Doom On: April 19, 2004 21:59 CDT
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To be read after the reveiw below This is pretty cool, I just wanted to say that it would be really funny if you keep making Bahamut get really pissed off by Glen.
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Title: sweet man
Reviewed By: Shadow of Doom On: April 19, 2004 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, this is an awesome story, your one of the best fanfiction writers I've seen (trust me, I've read a lot of good FF, but almost nothing compares to this). A few problems along the lines of grammer usage and such (write it on Microsoft word, and then c&p here), I still can't figure out how Valefor would know about the Book of Revalations (unless [?]Cecil[?] is a nun or Valefor somehow got his claws on a copy of The Holy Bible). The only other problem I have with this os not your fault at all (It's my mind's evil thought processing skills), I have an IQ of 151 and 8/10 geniusses (146 is a genius) suffer from minor paranoia. Then I thought about how embarrassing it would be to go to the bathroom and know someones watching every single embarrassing momment of your life, then well, let's leave it at my paranoia flared up (now I hope everyone who reads this becomes paranoid [I just want to know, by show of responses, how many people would ever think of something so horrible (I know I have a sick mind, don't remind me) or embarrassing...ever...without the help of others to push the idea along] because, well...I hate to be alone in the world, but I hate being the same as everyone else, but I hate being different, so I sulk away up in my room, letting life pass me by, living a life not worth living... Oh God dammit, I was rambling again, oh well, Ijust don't care anymore.
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Title: I WILL KILL YOU
Reviewed By: *Zeros* On: January 10, 2004 16:29 CST
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I WILL KILL YOU IF YOU DON'T UPDATE SOON
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Title: bring out the FLARE
Reviewed By: silver frost On: December 12, 2003 05:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH YEAH!!! At last a story about the Dragon King! I was hoping that metal keiya and I will be the first tocome up with something about him but it's okay,I like the story but try to check your spelling or are they just typographical errors?Anyway keep it up and unleash the FURY!!!
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Reviewed By: Zeros On: December 05, 2003 19:35 CST
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Awsome story! Please finish quickly abit of advice You should have Alexander, Ark, Knights of the Round, Eden, Tiamat and Bahamut ZERO put in the story.
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Reviewed By: MetalKeiya [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 14:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Spankin' good, man! Bahamut rules!!!
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Reviewed By: dark angel of the night [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2003 15:14 CDT
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yay ^_^, another chapter
p.s. when is bahamut zero going to show up? |
Reviewed By: dark angel of the night [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2003 04:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is good, i can't think of better words to describe it (plus i really like bahamut, he's my favorite aeon/eidilon/GF/whatever) |
Reviewed By: dragon88 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2003 10:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^-^ loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove it!!!!! ^_^!!! very original!
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Reviewed By: G-Dog On: December 08, 2002 20:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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dude, this is one cool story, just one thing though if you dont hurry up I swear I will hunt you down and kill you myself. Just kidding but seriously I am not a very patient person. |
Reviewed By: G-Dog On: December 08, 2002 20:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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dude, this is one cool story, just one thing though if you dont hurry up I i swear I will hunt you down and kill you myself. Just kidding but seriously I am not a very patient person. |
