| "An Innocent Sketch" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Spartan429 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 06:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story. I don't get to see many good Kei/Shi fics. A sequel would be really nice.
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: Brimstonephoenix On: July 02, 2004 01:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
its was good even though my eyes were distracted somehow
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Reviewed By: Predhead On: November 11, 2003 02:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
SEQUEL!!! ME WANT SEQUEL!!
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Title: fhghf
Reviewed By: gghfgh On: October 17, 2003 10:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
great but is 1 the hist
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Reviewed By: Koryu On: July 10, 2003 14:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED it!! SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL!!! There is a shortage of good non-lemon Keitaro/Shinobu fics. Nice (albeit short) story. *jumps around like Kaolla* SEQUEL!!! |
Reviewed By: Kinata_Damido On: June 22, 2003 14:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Finally!! A Shinobu/Keitaro fanfic!!!! You have completely made my day. Definately write a sequel!!! it is demanded! BTW Happosai...where ere those other fics? Gimme a link to any, I dont care about rating, cuz I've searched all over the internet with google and yahoo and this is the first Keitaro/Shinobu fic I found... |
Reviewed By: Happosai451 On: June 10, 2003 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sugoi! That was a great one-shot! I've looked everywhere for a plausible Shinobu x Keitaro fanfic that's tasteful and not reaching past PG-13. Kudos! Excellent job! I would like to see (nay, demand!) a sequel! |
Reviewed By: Mikey On: January 21, 2003 11:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it. Make the sequel. |
Reviewed By: OtakuSama On: December 31, 2002 01:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A really sweet and cute story. I really liked it,and I think you should continue! One thing: Shinobu is a 7th grader, but thats a minor thing I can overlook. A second story would be great, I know I'd read it |
Reviewed By: maico On: January 12, 2003 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow great. you portraied the chars great but su was a bit on the calm side and shinobu is in 7th grade but who cares it was great! i love these sorta fan fics cuz there so unpredicatable. plz make another ur great! |
