| "Unexpected Change" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: frozenfire On: November 17, 2004 20:08 CST
Comment/Review:
ha this is great. please please please don't be one of the people who start a fic then just leave it. those people kinda stink. cheers!
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Reviewed By: Si-Fi On: August 30, 2004 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really great fic. Try to make pikachu as realitic of a human as possible. As for the name I suggest Samantha or Sam for short. Or maybe Jewel.
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Reviewed By: inumaru12 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 10:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
YAAA PIKACHU IS AN GIRL! PIKACHU IS MY FAVORITE POKEMON BESIDES ABOSLE FROM SAPPIRE AND RUBY! FOR THE NAME HOW BOUT CRYSTAL OR MOONBAY (FROM ZOIDS ^_^)
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Reviewed By: happosai451 On: June 10, 2003 23:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting! I wonder if you can make it a Ranma1/2xPokemon crossover...Pikachu falls into Pool of Drowned Girl...she can still shock people in her human form...it would make for a very interesting crossover! |
Reviewed By: yankeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2002 07:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good start for a fanfic. I never saw one like this before. Add more action. You had good spelling even though you forgot to capatilize some names. Don't stop keep writing! |
