| "The Demon Within" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Aw!
Reviewed By: Niko-yasha (Not logged in) On: July 30, 2004 19:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Poor Jin.... *sniff* Good fic!! Plaese read mine!
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Reviewed By: lil_d7 On: February 03, 2004 18:02 CST
Comment/Review:
hey thats a good idea!!!! Add xiaoyu and pair her and jin! That'd be cool.
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Reviewed By: peanut_pas On: January 29, 2004 19:02 CST
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i like ur fic plz add xiaoyu in i love them 2gether! and please make it a multi part! thanx alot
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Reviewed By: unknown On: March 30, 2003 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For a short story it was great! No wonder you got an A on this paper. It's funny that out of all the things you could have wrote for your paper, you decided to write about JIN!!! But then again, how can you resist,he is FINE! *drools about Jin* Opps sorry about that. Keep writing! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: KaibaGrl007 On: December 30, 2002 15:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is awesome! Either the author is very
brave or she has a very cool teacher because if my writing partner and I ever turned something like that in, our english teacher would have a fit! She'd have our head-probally litteraly! She never has really liked us anyway. |
