| "Secrets Are Never Revealed" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2003 12:43 CDT
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OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH! Mysterious package. And they contain some good pokemon.
Please continue. I wanna get some torture in here. Please continue soon. This is a good fic. |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2003 12:41 CDT
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Getting good so far. The idea of flipping a coin to ecide something really works well. I priefer rock, paper, scissors myself but what the heck.
I'm gonna read chapter 3 now. I'll leave a review as well for it. |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2003 12:38 CDT
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Hey, this is good so far. AH, precious memories. I don't think that many of us will be able to forget Pokemon for a while.
Anyway, this is good so far and thanks for reviewing my pokemon fic. Thanks to your suggestion, the rating will go up as there will be more blood in it.
DONTCHA JUST LOVE A GOOD HORROR THING! I DO! |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 12:51 CDT
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WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE THESE? |
Reviewed By: Shadow~Magician [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 21:52 CST
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Hey, thats pretty good for a start. Maybe you should think on making the chapters longer, and making a new paragraph every time someone talks. It makes it easier to read. besides that, keep going! Nice start. |
