| "Jesse's Torment" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: some person On: November 15, 2004 13:05 CST
Comment/Review:
that was fucked up
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Reviewed By: Yourallfuckingstupid On: September 24, 2004 23:15 CDT
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YOU ARE ALL FUCKING RETARDS PLAIN AND SIMPLE. LEAVE THE MAN ALONE YOU FUCKING DRUGED OUT LOSER COCK SUCKING BATSTARDS. I DIDN'T EVEN LIKE THE FIC BUT AT LEST I AIN'T GOING TO FLAME HIM FOR IT. YOU DIDN'T LIKE IT WELL...FUCK YOU IN THE ASS GOD YOUR ALL SO PATHETICALLY STUPID ITS ALMOST FUNNY. YOUR ALL A BUNCH OF CUM GUZZLING GUTTER SLUTS.
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Reviewed By: yomofo On: March 10, 2004 00:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man this is disgusting but very well written I love how psychotic Ash is and how you described everything in such a realistic way man I have to hand it to you, you could be the next big horror writer
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Reviewed By: Trupan23 On: October 30, 2003 17:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
your a god damn sick ass mother fucker you gay bitch. Every girl in the world who has read this will be after yor blood you gay asshole. oh my god that is sick. YOU GAY FAGGOTTY TWISTED BASTARD HAVE YOU NO RESPECT FOR THE WOMEN. EVERY ONE WHO WANTS TO READ A GOOD STORY READ THE ONES BY TRUPAN234. PLEASE IGNORE THE SPELLING MISTAKES. FLAME IF YOU WISH AT LEAST I HAVE RESPECT FOR WOMEN. SERCER YOU GAY TWISTED FAGGOT
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Reviewed By: joe On: July 26, 2003 07:22 CDT
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i agree ur much better than dragonwarrior watever they dont have a plot and the stories suck just a concerned reader |
Reviewed By: NawtyDawg69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2003 03:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Again, great work. No one wants to hear from you demon lord of whatever or dragonwarrior. No one cares, just go away, shit. Oh, and Demon lord, you talk about sercer's spelling, you misspelled past, you dumb fucker. So go fuck yourselves, fuck your dads, fuck your brothers, and get the fuck out. |
Reviewed By: The Demon Lord of Panda [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 00:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay. I reviewed you before, and decided, well fuck, it's 1 in the morning, summer break, and I've sat through part one- may as well live through part two. Not only did I realize that I will have nightmares but that Dragonwarrior84 and I will now have to conspire together to kill you.
First of all, you spelled "awakening "wrong.
Second of all, if you call this writing you need to go back to school. Maybe it's how you can write in this perspective- maybe you have the 5th grade education.
Third of all, I don't usually pick on people in flames, but fuck that, fuck this, and fuck you. YOU ARE SICK.
In addition, I think you not only proved your gothic and MASOCHISTIC outlook for POKEMON (I mean, really. pokemon. come ON it's a kiddie cartoon, man)but also that you are immature. Your comment about how dragonwarrior84 will never be better than you was especially ""cute""
And finally, I think my friend and everyone else who has flamed you is right. You are a sick little motherfucker who makes pokemon into a disgusting playground for rape and your scary little ideals, and you SHOULD_BE_SHOT. Also- I think every feminist in the world would hunt you down for this. What the fuck is your problem?
I was once taught that it's best to write what you know, so I leave asking you this:
Do you write this from experiance?
I don't think I'd put it passed you. |
Reviewed By: koneko tenshi ecchi On: January 01, 2003 17:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woh. still very good. shut the FUCK up dragonwarrior. i mean, keep your FUCKIN comments to yourself. i you dont like this person, stop being an annoying bitch. i dont care if your a guy. IF you are a guy, then stop acting like a freakin women annoying this author. bitch. |
Reviewed By: NawtyDawg69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 20:29 CST
Comment/Review:
Yes, please write more and try to add misty in, heheheheheh.....also, dragonwarrior, SHUT THE FUCK UP AND GO AWAY ALREADY!!!! Jesus, if i wanted to here all this bitching, whining, and moaning i'd go to lumthemad.net! |
Reviewed By: GunSniper-Nightmare On: December 12, 2002 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it write more |
Reviewed By: no ash dont no [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2002 01:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again a Masterful fic that makes me so fucking horny we should meet in person |
Reviewed By: Dragonwarrior84 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2002 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the fuck were you thinking making this fic you have it as Nc17 but really its a R fic Are you retarded you have no imaginaton when it comes to wrighting Lemmons Wheres THE SEX you are still a Fourth rate writer writing eigth rate lemmons Oh IM kicking you to make you tighter guess what numb nuts it doesn"t work |
Reviewed By: Sercer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2002 04:38 CST
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Reviewed By: Nawtydawg69 On: December 17, 2002 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've softened in this, realizing it's just a lie; the life leaving her breath, the pain gone when she dies...Disturbingly wonderful fic, great writing and excellent job in portraying the complete loss of concience in a psychopath... |
