| "Never Thought I'd Miss You..." Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Graywords-girl On: October 13, 2003 16:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think it's Zel! I love L/Z! GO L/Z! L/Z Forever!
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Reviewed By: Xelis Metalium On: June 09, 2002 16:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think it's Xelloss. I might just have weird taste, but Xelloss and Lina and Demonic children would be COOL! Little people with purple hair, red, slitted eyes, THEYED BE SO CUTE! |
Reviewed By: DEMONIC FANGIRL On: September 28, 2001 20:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think it's Gourry! L/G is GOOOD pair! That was sooo sad! I liked it! Write more! though... you should try adding in more descriptions of what else is happening. like you didn't say that it was raining or where she was at the beginning of the story. it's hard for a reader to change their idea of the setting mid story. |
