| "Beyond The Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Angel of Twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 08:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Really great fic! its on my favs. list! Yami: I want my hikari! Me: -_- your doing it again! I thought i told you not to do that to EVERY fic that MIGHT have a y/y pairing. Yami: I don't remember that. Yugi: But you gave her-*yami clasps hand over mouth* Yami: What she don't know won't hurt anybody! Me: You might want to reconsider that! Yami: O.O *runs for dear life* UPDATE SOON BEFORE SHE KILLS ME!!!!!!!! Yugi: Ja ne! ^______^
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Reviewed By: Sharon On: August 18, 2004 11:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yugi:*crying* Me:It's ok Yugi. Yami will *hopefully* find out what happened to ya and find you. Yugi:*still crying* Me:Marik! Malik! YM&M:What?*Mill.Rod in hand behind their back* Me:Drop the mind control NOW!!! YM&M:Fine. Yugi:Update please before she kills Marik and Malik! Me:And DON'T use SWEAR WORDS! Some CHILDREN are reading this! YM&M:PLEASE before she KILLS US!
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Reviewed By: RyuArashi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2002 16:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this....please continue!! Can't wait to see the next installment. |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: December 09, 2002 15:27 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a great story! I hope you add more of it soon! I really, really want to see what Mai's harpies are so excited about and what Yami's going to do next. Is he going to find out that Yugi was kidnapped? Is he going to find Yugi at Mai's? Please post more soon! |
