Reviewed By: dark_flea On: January 04, 2003 00:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Ahh, its getting interesting. Or more so, it got interesting at ch1, got better at 2, and keeps the interest at 3. i say congrats on this piece, it is good. (and based on notes in ch1, its really good for your first eva piece.)
i would say though, be careful when switching between scenes. if you jump too much and don't keep it clear you're changing, you might lose the reader which could instigate a bad review. just a fair warning from a pleased reader. |
