| "Toto's House Becomes A Home" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: yes yes good
Reviewed By: leon90 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 14:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
are you the crimson from the forms? if so....why was I banned? nice story by the way
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Title: Too Cute!
Reviewed By: Fujimiya Ran On: January 29, 2004 17:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Aw, that was well done...you phrases it very well...and you're one of the rare people that make children's writing seem easy! Wonderful!
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Reviewed By: Kurai098 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2002 01:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You mean no one has r+r this piece?! I think its wonderful! I hated how Weiss kreuz ended with drama about Toto and nagi, but i think your poem is excellent! You post it somewhere else, like fanfic.net to get lots of reviews. sayonara! ^_- |
