| "Voices In My Head" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Animagess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 20:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad. I found the donkey part a bit... Laughable. And Sakura Kinomoto doesn't exist, does she? *stares* I see. Well, as far as angst goes, it's better than a lot of fics I've read. Ya-huh.
At first I thought it might be like my own angst fic "All the Little Voices", but apparently it's not. And how does Yugi go from shy, sensitive introvert to howling depression-ridden smart-mouthed teen? I think it'd be pretty interesting if someone did a fic about the transition. *glances to the side* Hmmm.... |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 08:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Pingpong: i'm one of the competitors and I say...Thumbs up! Read mine~http://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/view_st.php?id=26403 |
Reviewed By: ZellDincht that can not log on..... On: December 26, 2002 14:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Thank You for another story! I have to keep in mind the car.... i have never read a story about a car crash before.... and i love cliffhangers but continue soon!!! i am at the library and i forgot my password!!!!!!! gosh that sucks... |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2002 04:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Great job! Kinda' sad though! But, that's how it supposed to be sooooo ROCK ON! |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam On: December 18, 2002 08:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeah r u gonna continue with this? Cos I'm not too sure if it's THE END or a merely a cliff hanger thing. GOD i hate those!!!!!!! Oh by the way
*sing song*#I'M A FIRST REVIEWER I'M FIRST REVIEWER!!!# |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam On: December 18, 2002 08:01 CST
Comment/Review:
You know I actually found some of that funny... about da it was da donkey. Sorry... T_T
Yami: You sadistic COW. MY ABIOU DIED AND YOU FIND IT FUNNY!!!!! *just about to go and maim her*
Yes i know but you know you can't hurt me cos i'll just double it back in my next chapter in MY
sadistic little fic.
Yami: O_O' *goes to maim at Seto and Bakura instead* |
